My love

Honestly, your vocab needs some work.

thanks

lovely thoughtful piece.  
but grammatical errors can be a distraction and take the goodness away from it.  
 
\'\'My love  
If you see me tomorrow  
 it is because of my love for you  
my love  
if you see \'me\' cry  
 I cry heart-shaped? tears for you\'\'  
 
\'if I see you falling    
I would? die to catch you\'  
 
instead of  
\'\'My sweet heart, if you I will cry with you\'\'  
maybe this?  
 \'\'My sweet heart,if you cry  
 I will cry with you\'\'?  
 
My Darlene  
if you \'were\' dying  
I \'would\' fly all around the world  
 Just for you to stay alive  
 my love  
 
 
By Kerr Glasgow  
 
it is a lovely poem .. i just think the grammar takes that away a little.  
 
hope that helped  
 
and welcome :)  
   
    
 
 
 
 
 

thanks

Seems like you have an accent maybe?? My dad speaks like that he Is very Portuguese.. Or maybe your grammar
I can't say anything about that my spelling sucks lol.. Anyways sweet poem

thanks and i am a st.Lucian we speak slang most times to each other and I speak mainly English  

I can tell I have lived my whole life with people that speak slang.. They sound like your poem reads

well it is a common mistake to type the same way you speak. i meant to change it before i pasted it but forgot to do so  

That's very true. Most do write how they speak.. I write slangy myself it's just what I know.. It's understandable