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Murder She Wrote
Blood red all around
no murder weapon
no body found.
Crimson splats
left on the walls
broken glass
you saw it all.
You were told
to stay outside
I told you twice
to run and hide.
Things got crazy
we had a fight
I stabbed that fucker
with my knife
I stabbed him twice
right in his face
then burned his
eyes with pepper mace
I reached inside
my leather boot
pulled out my gun
"MOM PLEASE!
DON'T SHOOT—!"
He fell right over
and hit the floor
I kicked his ass
to the door.
I tied his body
first his feet
then tied his neck
yes nice and neat.
To my truck his
ride was ready
on the back flap
of my Chevy.
Off the path
I drove all night
dragged his body
left and right
I drove my truck
down a winding road
then stopped and
dropped him in a hole
I drove on home
the door was locked
my child screamed
it's face in shock!
Cop lights Flashing
you must not tell
I killed your father
now ring the bell !
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 27th May 2014
| Edited 22nd May 2022
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Re: Murder She Wrote
28th May 2014 4:03am
Yep, you took him out hard!
A Girl got to do what a girl got to do. Sad the kid had to see it though.
A Girl got to do what a girl got to do. Sad the kid had to see it though.
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re: Re: Murder She Wrote
28th May 2014 4:56am
Yes that was unfortunate!
Thanks for reading this Glynis I actually like this one a bit *WEG*
Hugs honey and thank you...
Broomie Xo
Thanks for reading this Glynis I actually like this one a bit *WEG*
Hugs honey and thank you...
Broomie Xo
Re: Murder She Wrote
28th May 2014 8:11am
Wow! Just Wow! Girl, the intensity and creativity in this ink blew me away. I absolutely love your rhyme schematic, Broom!
Your flow seemed smooth and effortless, not forced like so many other poets do when trying to rhyme. Like me; I can't rhyme for shit! Anyway, this is awesome sweety! Xo
Your flow seemed smooth and effortless, not forced like so many other poets do when trying to rhyme. Like me; I can't rhyme for shit! Anyway, this is awesome sweety! Xo
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re: Re: Murder She Wrote
28th May 2014 9:48pm
Yes I was feeling mischievous when I wrote this.
Glad you enjoyed reading this story ")
I always appreciate your comments Rain!
Broomie Xo
Glad you enjoyed reading this story ")
I always appreciate your comments Rain!
Broomie Xo
Re: Murder She Wrote
28th May 2014 12:37pm
WOW! I guess the couples' counseling didn't work out lol
This is a brilliantly intense piece ... Much more hardcore than the reggae song of the same title or Rhianna's I Shot a Man Down
This is a brilliantly intense piece ... Much more hardcore than the reggae song of the same title or Rhianna's I Shot a Man Down
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re: Re: Murder She Wrote
Wow thank you for coming here to read from me and I love your comments thank you LBSP ")
PS yeah no marriage counseling for those two, it didn't work you are right lmao!
Cheers
Broomie
PS yeah no marriage counseling for those two, it didn't work you are right lmao!
Cheers
Broomie
Re: Murder She Wrote
Anonymous
28th May 2014 2:11pm
love the way this was written, very smooth flow.

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re: Re: Murder She Wrote
28th May 2014 9:54pm
It was one of those things, I opened the pc and it just jumped on the page!
Nice to see you DK
Hugs
Broomie
Nice to see you DK
Hugs
Broomie
Re: Murder She Wrote
28th May 2014 4:09pm
The energy rolls with this piece Broomie!!!
Dig the rush of adrenaline!!!
Dig the rush of adrenaline!!!
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re: Re: Murder She Wrote
28th May 2014 9:56pm
((((((((((((Soul)))))))))
Yup it's all there.
Thanks for stopping in and having a read from me.
Nice to see you here Gabe<3 I'm glad you liked this story.
Luv
Broomie
Yup it's all there.
Thanks for stopping in and having a read from me.
Nice to see you here Gabe<3 I'm glad you liked this story.
Luv
Broomie
Re: Murder She Wrote
30th May 2014 11:14pm
love the intensity in this written piece, well done zazzles. You always seem to amaze me and I look forward to reading more sis <3 Jess
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re: Re: Murder She Wrote
31st May 2014 5:19am
Thank you Jess nice of you to say, lad you liked it.
Hope your doing well haven't really seen you a lot lately don;t be a stanger.
Broom
Hope your doing well haven't really seen you a lot lately don;t be a stanger.
Broom
Re: Murder She Wrote
31st May 2014 00:57am
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31st May 2014 5:20am
Hi Hashman, thanks Hun I appreciate the read very much, glad you enjoyed!
Hugs
Broomie
Hugs
Broomie
Re: Murder She Wrote
31st May 2014 11:19pm
This is very satisfying to read. I like it. No only does it flow, but also it is intense. I can imagine everything.
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re: Re: Murder She Wrote
1st Jun 2014 6:57am
Hello nice to meet you psycho_lullby
I appreciate what you said it made me smile
thank you for reading from me...
Cheers
Broom
I appreciate what you said it made me smile
thank you for reading from me...
Cheers
Broom
Re: Murder She Wrote
8th Jun 2014 7:50pm
re: Re: Murder She Wrote
Hello Frankee :)
Nice to see you in my corner again.
Glad you enjoyed this twisted tail ")
Broomie
Nice to see you in my corner again.
Glad you enjoyed this twisted tail ")
Broomie
Re: Murder She Wrote
28th Jul 2014 8:18pm
re: Re: Murder She Wrote
LOL yeah well sometimes i like to write from a different perspective Mar ")
Broomie :)
Broomie :)
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Re: Re. Murder She Wrote
22nd May 2022 1:12pm
Thanks my dear dear friend
Thanks for the reading list !
Loves you too much ♥️♥️
Love Jackie 😘
Thanks for the reading list !
Loves you too much ♥️♥️
Love Jackie 😘
Re: Re. Murder She Wrote
22nd May 2022 1:13pm
Thanks my dear dear friend Pabo
Thanks for the reading list !
Loves you too much ♥️♥️
Love Jackie 😘
Thanks for the reading list !
Loves you too much ♥️♥️
Love Jackie 😘
Re. Murder She Wrote
7th Mar 2024 5:18pm
Hello Zazzles, I decided to go back in time to an earlier poem that you wrote.
A fantastic piece of writing. Violent, sick & twisted. Great rhymes as well. My style!!
A fantastic piece of writing. Violent, sick & twisted. Great rhymes as well. My style!!
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7th Mar 2024 8:35pm