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Release Me, or Just Love
breathy mouth lusciously
encircling me, deadly erotica
small sharp teeth... ecstasy
could maim, could wound
her eyes, so beautiful, I swim
in their depth, yet flickering within
some madness of possessiveness
I want her, adore her and hate her
my man, she purrs, nuzzling
my groin, and I proudly rise
she encircles me with her tongue
hugs me high to pleasure universe
her hands, lips ...thighs
they are my handcuffs to this bed
within the room that never opens
windows that are forever curtained
swearing each morning to never return
each day ends with my lust aching
to be stroked, blown into an inferno
on the sheets I am rutting again
one day I swear, even as I cum
I will kill her...and be free.
encircling me, deadly erotica
small sharp teeth... ecstasy
could maim, could wound
her eyes, so beautiful, I swim
in their depth, yet flickering within
some madness of possessiveness
I want her, adore her and hate her
my man, she purrs, nuzzling
my groin, and I proudly rise
she encircles me with her tongue
hugs me high to pleasure universe
her hands, lips ...thighs
they are my handcuffs to this bed
within the room that never opens
windows that are forever curtained
swearing each morning to never return
each day ends with my lust aching
to be stroked, blown into an inferno
on the sheets I am rutting again
one day I swear, even as I cum
I will kill her...and be free.
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 27th May 2014
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Re: Release Me, or Just Love
Anonymous
27th May 2014 5:17am
I like the story entwined in the poem and the descriptive words.
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27th May 2014 2:06pm
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27th May 2014 7:05am
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Re: Release Me, or Just Love
27th May 2014 11:36am
Excellence Dear Grace-You've been delving into Your other dark side I see ;)
Wonderful Write!!!
Wonderful Write!!!
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re: Re: Release Me, or Just Love
27th May 2014 2:09pm
As always your encouragement is very much appreciated, Soul...thank you so much.
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27th May 2014 11:40am
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28th May 2014 00:00am
Re: Release Me, or Just Love
28th May 2014 00:40am
Another wonderful Write Grace!
This could have easily been a story poem, but what an amazing erotic one. That ending, what can I say. Lustful wonderful!!!
much love!
This could have easily been a story poem, but what an amazing erotic one. That ending, what can I say. Lustful wonderful!!!
much love!
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28th May 2014 4:33am
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Anonymous
28th May 2014 8:47pm
Okay, didn't expect THAT from you my friend.
Love this: "some madness of possessiveness." Wonderfully erotic.
Love this: "some madness of possessiveness." Wonderfully erotic.
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re: Re: Release Me, or Just Love
29th May 2014 00:33am
Sometimes I almost touch the madness too. :) thanks for reading me SW9618... Honoured as always.
Re: Release Me, or Just Love
29th May 2014 3:21pm
This was surprisingly beautiful even though this was my first time to read your poem on this particular genre. I love your subtle hints of eroticism on this piece! Write on...
@EngrVV
@EngrVV
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re: Re: Release Me, or Just Love
29th May 2014 5:55pm
Thank you EngrVV...very kind of you. Sometimes I get those itch to write like that. :)
Re: Release Me, or Just Love
9th Jun 2014 2:33pm
mixed feelings...i bet he'll love her even more next time,rather than killing. beautiful poem Grace.
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re: Re: Release Me, or Just Love
9th Jun 2014 3:03pm
Hi dustyjewels...nice to see you here. Thank you so much for dropping by and reading.
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