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Golden Daydreams
A cool blue breeze
stirred a silent moment
Stones skipping across
the calm waters
- echoes
ripples through my past
The unforgettable song
Of happiness and regret..
– are
the heartbeats of
you and me
In the silent
ivory silken dawn,
flashes of life
-reverberate nostalgia
To immortalize our love
In the Cathedral of my heart
Precious images
awake the streams
of golden daydreams
Seashells and whispers
Ocean colored memories
stirred a silent moment
Stones skipping across
the calm waters
- echoes
ripples through my past
The unforgettable song
Of happiness and regret..
– are
the heartbeats of
you and me
In the silent
ivory silken dawn,
flashes of life
-reverberate nostalgia
To immortalize our love
In the Cathedral of my heart
Precious images
awake the streams
of golden daydreams
Seashells and whispers
Ocean colored memories
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Re: Golden Daydreams
Anonymous
26th May 2014 8:20pm
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28th May 2014 1:43am
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26th May 2014 10:00pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 26th May 2014 10:35pm
26th May 2014 10:34pm
This is a gorgeous write Sister G. Makes me want to go to the beach. LOL!!! Enjoyed much! Xo :)
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re: Re: Golden Daydreams
28th May 2014 1:45am
Thank you Sis!
I was daydream of going to beach when I wrote this, Lol!
much love!
I was daydream of going to beach when I wrote this, Lol!
much love!
Re: Golden Daydreams
Anonymous
26th May 2014 11:51pm
"Seashells and whispers
Ocean colored memories"
. . .now not only is this stanza deep, it's also vivid and extremely breathtaking. Beautiful wordplay here, Glynis, dear friend. Sigh. xo, Devlin.
Ocean colored memories"
. . .now not only is this stanza deep, it's also vivid and extremely breathtaking. Beautiful wordplay here, Glynis, dear friend. Sigh. xo, Devlin.
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28th May 2014 1:47am
Thank you Devlin
you know I'm really into nature so I go there a lot when I get stuck. LOL!
much love Sis!
you know I'm really into nature so I go there a lot when I get stuck. LOL!
much love Sis!
Re: Golden Daydreams
27th May 2014 00:28am
I love the way you express your feelings in such beauty, one with nature, lovely simply lovely...
Broom
Broom
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28th May 2014 4:24am
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27th May 2014 3:03am
I love that dear Glynis...I see it, almost touch it...the yearning and regrets.:)
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re: Re: Golden Daydreams
28th May 2014 4:27am
Grace, your heart is pure and emotionally rich.
Thank you for feeling this.
much love Sis!
Thank you for feeling this.
much love Sis!
Re: Golden Daydreams
27th May 2014 5:17am
"-reverberate nostalgia
To immortalize our love
In the Cathedral of my heart"<--girl, how the heck did your mind conjure up those amazing lines?
Crushing on this ink, Glynis...Xo
To immortalize our love
In the Cathedral of my heart"<--girl, how the heck did your mind conjure up those amazing lines?
Crushing on this ink, Glynis...Xo
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28th May 2014 4:31am