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Jack
Would you take the pain back, Jack?
And paint my heart black, Jack?
You don't know jack, Jack.
About my feelings.
JACK.
And paint my heart black, Jack?
You don't know jack, Jack.
About my feelings.
JACK.
Published 23rd Mar 2011
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23rd Mar 2011 7:25pm
I thought this was fun.
I don't know, but it's compelling, somehow, well at least to me... maybe because I love that name.
Good job!
I don't know, but it's compelling, somehow, well at least to me... maybe because I love that name.
Good job!
23rd Mar 2011 8:37pm
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