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I hate this dream
So far away
We slumber under the same dream
Distant oceans dividing our touch
World's apart
And it hurts
Only to be close by you
We both enlace into each others dream
Souls touch with oceans shrink to tears
Our worlds collide for the blissful end
The hurt subsides and we're closer
Your almost felt
In the midst
Tears desicated by our heat of loneliness
Heartbeats pound and we recollect our touch
A once shared kiss branded forever
Tattooed within the storm of our first time
Just one more time I beg as I wake
With no one to tell I love you
We slumber under the same dream
Distant oceans dividing our touch
World's apart
And it hurts
Only to be close by you
We both enlace into each others dream
Souls touch with oceans shrink to tears
Our worlds collide for the blissful end
The hurt subsides and we're closer
Your almost felt
In the midst
Tears desicated by our heat of loneliness
Heartbeats pound and we recollect our touch
A once shared kiss branded forever
Tattooed within the storm of our first time
Just one more time I beg as I wake
With no one to tell I love you
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Re: I hate this dream
19th May 2014 4:09pm
re: Re: I hate this dream
20th May 2014 3:04am
Thanks cutie for understanding...
And thanks for the support...much appreciated:)
And thanks for the support...much appreciated:)
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21st May 2014 3:53pm
Re: I hate this dream
19th May 2014 4:47pm
re: Re: I hate this dream
20th May 2014 3:05am
Re: I hate this dream
Anonymous
19th May 2014 10:56pm
Sweet Smiles.....this is sooooooo touching. You have conveyed your emotional longing beautifully. RL for me. Luv ya! CP xo :)
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re: Re: I hate this dream
20th May 2014 3:06am
Re: I hate this dream
21st May 2014 2:58am
...this poem was love at first read for me,... :)
I think I wanna french kiss it....Xo
I think I wanna french kiss it....Xo
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re: Re: I hate this dream
21st May 2014 3:39am
Hahahaha your funny Tara...
Thank you so much for reading
French kiss...whaaat...
Thank you so much for reading
French kiss...whaaat...
re: Re: I hate this dream
2nd Jun 2014 10:54pm
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2nd Jun 2014 11:11pm
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2nd Jun 2014 10:42pm
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2nd Jun 2014 10:57pm