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Our island
Over there, at end of this way
Our nice island where we could
Find a lovely time, just for us
Imagine ce lieu de rêve
We could go just when we wish
You and me, upto we need
To come back in the world
Imagine ce temps de rêve
What we'll do, never have to know
Only you and me, just our secret
But all people could imagine
Imagine... vite réalisons ce rêve!
Translation of the three french sentences
Imagine this dream place
Imagine this perfect time
Imagine... hurry up, let us realize this dream!
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Published 18th May 2014
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18th May 2014 2:34am
What a beautiful calm write and a gorgeous picture to accompany it. Enjoyed very mush! :)
18th May 2014 3:00am
18th May 2014 7:02am
18th May 2014 7:51am
Oh sorry
Imagine this dream place
Imagine this perfect time
Imagine... hurry up, let us realize this dream!
Thank to ask!
Imagine this dream place
Imagine this perfect time
Imagine... hurry up, let us realize this dream!
Thank to ask!
18th May 2014 1:47pm
"vite réalisons ce rêve!"
you know how much i love mixing languages, Alain, this was so well done. much enjoyed.
you know how much i love mixing languages, Alain, this was so well done. much enjoyed.
18th May 2014 10:04pm
Yes, I remember that you like mixing languages... Proud that you are enjoyed by this poem, thank you a lot katja!
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21st May 2014 11:51pm
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22nd May 2014 3:59am
Yes, I like to do that... very beautiful to mix languages. Thank you, Gabriel, for your nice comment!
