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Playground
We hardly had anything in common
Me; a little Redneck Billy, white girl
You; a Puerto Rican, Demi God
Perfectly mismatched
I love George Jones
You love whatever your dancing to, on Molly
I loathe restaurants
You, a chef
The fates they met
and on our side
when our paths/ bodies crossed
Our Common Ground; Your Bed/ Our Playground
Bending, gripping your head board,
feeling how deeply you had me
This is when we precisely fit
The way you held my hips
and would slowly thrust into me
at a perfect,
"Oh My God" angle (my Ecstasy Angel)
I never knew what elation was,
until you picked me up
and placed me on the foot of your bedframe
and was held in place by
your penetrating, brown, hard cock
I have replayed this over and over again,
many times, alone,
in my own bed,
touching myself
until I gush of your sweet memory...
I'd keep writing
but I can't form
a singe sentence
about you, on paper,
without needing
something inside me
Me; a little Redneck Billy, white girl
You; a Puerto Rican, Demi God
Perfectly mismatched
I love George Jones
You love whatever your dancing to, on Molly
I loathe restaurants
You, a chef
The fates they met
and on our side
when our paths/ bodies crossed
Our Common Ground; Your Bed/ Our Playground
Bending, gripping your head board,
feeling how deeply you had me
This is when we precisely fit
The way you held my hips
and would slowly thrust into me
at a perfect,
"Oh My God" angle (my Ecstasy Angel)
I never knew what elation was,
until you picked me up
and placed me on the foot of your bedframe
and was held in place by
your penetrating, brown, hard cock
I have replayed this over and over again,
many times, alone,
in my own bed,
touching myself
until I gush of your sweet memory...
I'd keep writing
but I can't form
a singe sentence
about you, on paper,
without needing
something inside me
Written by
ScarlettA
(Scarlett_A)
Published 16th May 2014
| Edited 28th May 2014
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Re: Play Ground
16th May 2014 9:49pm
I like how you and him were complete opposites but still had eachother like that, nice :)
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16th May 2014 9:52pm
Re: Play Ground
16th May 2014 9:59pm
What stands out most in your writing is honesty.
You put yourself out there unafraid of recourse.
I admire that...
xx
You put yourself out there unafraid of recourse.
I admire that...
xx
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16th May 2014 10:01pm
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Anonymous
16th May 2014 10:06pm
I enjoyed this sweet picture of two mismatched lovers (dissimilarity) and them playing in their bed (unity). The ending was powerful and personal!
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16th May 2014 10:08pm
Re: Play Ground
Echo Murderotica.
Favourite lines, capture to erotic/romantic convergence well:
"...our paths/ bodies crossed
Our Common Ground; Your bed/ our play ground"
An all-conquering (of differences) love consummated in this story. Hint of Romeo-Juliet here (the Montagues-Capulets being the respective races).
Favourite lines, capture to erotic/romantic convergence well:
"...our paths/ bodies crossed
Our Common Ground; Your bed/ our play ground"
An all-conquering (of differences) love consummated in this story. Hint of Romeo-Juliet here (the Montagues-Capulets being the respective races).
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re: Re: Play Ground
16th May 2014 10:58pm
Thank You for pointing out what struck you. It is very helpful in shaping my writing efforts
Re: Play Ground
17th May 2014 1:20am
Steamy realism, Ms Scarlett. Well done!
"... and placed me on the foot of your bedframe
and was held in place by ..."
Whew! Feel the heat!
"... and placed me on the foot of your bedframe
and was held in place by ..."
Whew! Feel the heat!
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Re: Playground
3rd Jul 2014 1:44pm
love nd affection like thread stitch the mismatch nd make singular existence
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