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The lonely fish
You have me trapped
deep underground
with too much security
and no life of the sound
where nothing could ever
sniff me out
not a boar not a bear nor a fox or a hound
I could have lived more
I could have been cool
what are you
a ruddy fool
keeping me trapped like a cat in a stool
like a fish
without it's school
we both see both guessed we both know
that in this sad non-meaningful
you'll never give me my rights to live
you'll never give me space to grow.
please reader, if you read, do leave a comment:]
deep underground
with too much security
and no life of the sound
where nothing could ever
sniff me out
not a boar not a bear nor a fox or a hound
I could have lived more
I could have been cool
what are you
a ruddy fool
keeping me trapped like a cat in a stool
like a fish
without it's school
we both see both guessed we both know
that in this sad non-meaningful
you'll never give me my rights to live
you'll never give me space to grow.
please reader, if you read, do leave a comment:]
Published 16th May 2014
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17th May 2014 10:42pm
"I could have lived more
I could have been cool
what are you
a ruddy fool"~
Man do i relate!! I remember feeling like this but then i came into my own & used that time away from school to learn myself & now I'm actually thankful for it! School wasn't the place for me i now see.
I just like all of this! Wrote very true with a clear perspective!
I could have been cool
what are you
a ruddy fool"~
Man do i relate!! I remember feeling like this but then i came into my own & used that time away from school to learn myself & now I'm actually thankful for it! School wasn't the place for me i now see.
I just like all of this! Wrote very true with a clear perspective!
18th May 2014 2:19pm
