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Murder in the City
They sit
as perfect strangers,
at a train station,
awaiting their chariot.
"I can't help but notice
that your jaw is wired shut"
she observes out loud.
She also sees
that he is reading
The Bell Jar
and this pleases her.
She elegantly spits
a mouthful of chew
into a bottle.
"Bar fight"
is the boys
only response.
She wants to fuck him.
"Why don't you just
smoke cigs?"
he asks.
She answers,
"I get away with this easier"
as their train pulls up
to the station.
Neither of them move.
Time elapses, their train
moves on, leaving them
to each other.
He wants to fuck her.
"Let me take you out"
she says smiling to her
new stranger.
They walk.
He can't be older than 21.
She's going to be 30.
They look like
some kind of poetry,
strolling together.
"What's your story?"
The boy asks.
"I'm a therapist.
I like Harley's
and look agreeable
in every shade
of red lip stick"
is her response.
She takes him
to the nearest hotel,
sarcastically stating,
"Best bar in town."
They sit in a hotel room,
staring at each other.
He can see up her dress.
She's wearing underwear
but barely.
She pulls it to the side,
so that he'll have to decide
if he's going to look
at her deep green eyes
or her tight slit of a pussy.
It's a toss up.
"What's your story?"
she asks.
Staring straight between
her legs,
in a type of pain
from his swelling cock
and mesmerized by the view
he states,
"I'm a colorful fuck up
with grand ambitions
and multiple drug addictions.
I don't sleep enough
and think too much."
She rubs her clit,
never taking her eyes off of him
and hopes,
she is making him uncomfortable.
She is not.
A pent up sigh
escapes the boys mouth.
She is getting off
on the seduction.
She crosses the room
and graciously touches
his jaw line.
She lowers steadily,
straddling him snugly.
She rocks, back and forth,
sweetly grinding him
over his clothes.
"Not this one"
she thinks.
She figures that he's not
going to be able to hurt her,
the way she wants.
Too young.
Too deep thinking and
For a moment,
she looks into his face.
She recognizes
a type of sadness here.
Many questions race
through her mind.
Where are your parents?
What the fuck have you survived?
Why are you so numb?
Do the drugs sedate the Hamster on your wheel?
Do I remind you of your Mother?
As if he could read her mind
and the questions disturbed him,
his eyes quickly shifted from
sadness to monstrous.
He grabs her by the hair,
yanking her across the hotel floor.
She screams. She tries to scramble.
She is actually caught off guard.
He pulls her to the door and barks,
"Open it!"
She motions to stand up.
He hits her back to
where she belongs;
on the floor.
"I didn't say get up, bitch!"
She's trembling a bit
but soaking wet.
"Be good and I won't kill you"
he says.
Something in his tone,
makes her sick to her stomach
but she doesn't know why?
She opens the door
and instantaneously
he picks her up by the
back of the neck
and bends her over
the stair railing.
His cock is in her,
before she can figure
out what's happening.
With each thrust into her,
she is sure that she
is going to cum.
He hits her in the face.
This draws blood.
"I didn't say cum!"
he enforces.
He pushes her
to the ground
and inserts his
shaft, completely
down her mouth
until he can no longer
see it.
He looses
everything he has,
down her throat.
She can't breathe.
She chokes.
She tries to relax.
She gags.
He rips her up by the arm,
like a child in trouble,
ushering her
into the bathroom.
Slamming both doors
behind him,
he scoops her up
and places her in the tub.
"Wash up, filthy slut!
he orders dryly.
She cries, removing her clothing.
He peers at her
with zero sympathy.
He smiles slightly
at his display.
"You're going to fucking die, whore!"
Again, something about his demeanor
makes her stomach turn upside down.
It doesn't feel like role play.
He asks,
"You like it when men hurt you?"
She says nothing.
She only looks up at him.
He's holding a bow knife.
She motions to turn off the water
and he cuts her arm with
the reflex of a rattle snake.
She clinches her teeth
and is truly terrified.
He instructs her
out of the bath
and into the bed.
She's still bleeding
from the laceration
but doesn't seem to notice.
He asks again, though shouting,
"Do you like it when men hurt you,
Yes or No, you dumb tramp!?!"
She obediently nods yes,
her eyes filling with tears again,
he steps toward her
and she shuts them tightly.
She believes
he will successfully
murder her, in this city.
She is reminded of a song
and convinces herself
it will be the last one
she'll ever play in her mind.
Then, as soft
and sweet as any man
has ever touched her,
he kisses her directly
on the forehead.
The gentleness/ contrast,
hits her so deep,
she sobs uncontrollably.
He softly,
wipes the tears from her face,
whispering,
"You're alright sweetheart."
She is still shaking when
he pulls his stiff cock out
and starts to fuck her.
His dick slides,
in and out of her.
He rubs her clit rhythmically.
"You ok baby?"
he questions while examining her
with his hands,
this time, searching her face.
The only response she
can muster up,
is a pleasure filled moan.
This makes him smile.
It takes only a moment
and she cums from
the depths of her soul.
She is positive that
she has never felt
anything like this.
She spasms.
She spasms.
She spasms
and finally relaxes.
He says nothing.
She says nothing.
He zips up his pants
and leaves the hotel.
They never say goodbye.
She remains in bed,
still dripping;
water, sweat, cum and blood,
as he makes his way,
down some back alley.
She whispers to herself/ to him,
"Thank You."
as perfect strangers,
at a train station,
awaiting their chariot.
"I can't help but notice
that your jaw is wired shut"
she observes out loud.
She also sees
that he is reading
The Bell Jar
and this pleases her.
She elegantly spits
a mouthful of chew
into a bottle.
"Bar fight"
is the boys
only response.
She wants to fuck him.
"Why don't you just
smoke cigs?"
he asks.
She answers,
"I get away with this easier"
as their train pulls up
to the station.
Neither of them move.
Time elapses, their train
moves on, leaving them
to each other.
He wants to fuck her.
"Let me take you out"
she says smiling to her
new stranger.
They walk.
He can't be older than 21.
She's going to be 30.
They look like
some kind of poetry,
strolling together.
"What's your story?"
The boy asks.
"I'm a therapist.
I like Harley's
and look agreeable
in every shade
of red lip stick"
is her response.
She takes him
to the nearest hotel,
sarcastically stating,
"Best bar in town."
They sit in a hotel room,
staring at each other.
He can see up her dress.
She's wearing underwear
but barely.
She pulls it to the side,
so that he'll have to decide
if he's going to look
at her deep green eyes
or her tight slit of a pussy.
It's a toss up.
"What's your story?"
she asks.
Staring straight between
her legs,
in a type of pain
from his swelling cock
and mesmerized by the view
he states,
"I'm a colorful fuck up
with grand ambitions
and multiple drug addictions.
I don't sleep enough
and think too much."
She rubs her clit,
never taking her eyes off of him
and hopes,
she is making him uncomfortable.
She is not.
A pent up sigh
escapes the boys mouth.
She is getting off
on the seduction.
She crosses the room
and graciously touches
his jaw line.
She lowers steadily,
straddling him snugly.
She rocks, back and forth,
sweetly grinding him
over his clothes.
"Not this one"
she thinks.
She figures that he's not
going to be able to hurt her,
the way she wants.
Too young.
Too deep thinking and
For a moment,
she looks into his face.
She recognizes
a type of sadness here.
Many questions race
through her mind.
Where are your parents?
What the fuck have you survived?
Why are you so numb?
Do the drugs sedate the Hamster on your wheel?
Do I remind you of your Mother?
As if he could read her mind
and the questions disturbed him,
his eyes quickly shifted from
sadness to monstrous.
He grabs her by the hair,
yanking her across the hotel floor.
She screams. She tries to scramble.
She is actually caught off guard.
He pulls her to the door and barks,
"Open it!"
She motions to stand up.
He hits her back to
where she belongs;
on the floor.
"I didn't say get up, bitch!"
She's trembling a bit
but soaking wet.
"Be good and I won't kill you"
he says.
Something in his tone,
makes her sick to her stomach
but she doesn't know why?
She opens the door
and instantaneously
he picks her up by the
back of the neck
and bends her over
the stair railing.
His cock is in her,
before she can figure
out what's happening.
With each thrust into her,
she is sure that she
is going to cum.
He hits her in the face.
This draws blood.
"I didn't say cum!"
he enforces.
He pushes her
to the ground
and inserts his
shaft, completely
down her mouth
until he can no longer
see it.
He looses
everything he has,
down her throat.
She can't breathe.
She chokes.
She tries to relax.
She gags.
He rips her up by the arm,
like a child in trouble,
ushering her
into the bathroom.
Slamming both doors
behind him,
he scoops her up
and places her in the tub.
"Wash up, filthy slut!
he orders dryly.
She cries, removing her clothing.
He peers at her
with zero sympathy.
He smiles slightly
at his display.
"You're going to fucking die, whore!"
Again, something about his demeanor
makes her stomach turn upside down.
It doesn't feel like role play.
He asks,
"You like it when men hurt you?"
She says nothing.
She only looks up at him.
He's holding a bow knife.
She motions to turn off the water
and he cuts her arm with
the reflex of a rattle snake.
She clinches her teeth
and is truly terrified.
He instructs her
out of the bath
and into the bed.
She's still bleeding
from the laceration
but doesn't seem to notice.
He asks again, though shouting,
"Do you like it when men hurt you,
Yes or No, you dumb tramp!?!"
She obediently nods yes,
her eyes filling with tears again,
he steps toward her
and she shuts them tightly.
She believes
he will successfully
murder her, in this city.
She is reminded of a song
and convinces herself
it will be the last one
she'll ever play in her mind.
Then, as soft
and sweet as any man
has ever touched her,
he kisses her directly
on the forehead.
The gentleness/ contrast,
hits her so deep,
she sobs uncontrollably.
He softly,
wipes the tears from her face,
whispering,
"You're alright sweetheart."
She is still shaking when
he pulls his stiff cock out
and starts to fuck her.
His dick slides,
in and out of her.
He rubs her clit rhythmically.
"You ok baby?"
he questions while examining her
with his hands,
this time, searching her face.
The only response she
can muster up,
is a pleasure filled moan.
This makes him smile.
It takes only a moment
and she cums from
the depths of her soul.
She is positive that
she has never felt
anything like this.
She spasms.
She spasms.
She spasms
and finally relaxes.
He says nothing.
She says nothing.
He zips up his pants
and leaves the hotel.
They never say goodbye.
She remains in bed,
still dripping;
water, sweat, cum and blood,
as he makes his way,
down some back alley.
She whispers to herself/ to him,
"Thank You."
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