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Beautiful Temptation
Dusk, purples and oranges cascade the skyline of paradise, sand and waves, breeze and illusion.
A silhouette of beauty takes my breathe,standing knee deep in the oceans current...
Eyes of sapphire blue, reflect like ice,in what's left of the suns rays, bouncing up off the water...
I try to watch unnoticed, but the beats of my heart trap me in frozen state, thoughts spoken outloud, remove me from hiding...
A stare that twists my mind calls to my soul, and I am drawn to her like honey...
Without even a thought, we are face to face with lips touching ever so softly...
She has the seductive powers to take from me, and I can do nothing to fight...
She calms my being with her hands, as they run down my chest and around to my lower back...
She causes chills to run up my spin, presses me deeper into the waves it covers our bodies...
Loosening strings, she removes the intimate cloth that covered her breasts, exposing her erect nipples from the coolness of the water...
The salty taste I can't help but crave against her sweetness...
More strings undone,our bottoms float away in front of my view; and I stiffen to fullness...
Pushing her naked body into mine, wrapping her legs around my waist, there are no words exchanged, but her sly seductive smile speaks volumes...
She pushes down deep onto me slowly, I gasp in awe of her warmth wetness for me...
Kissing her nipples, caressing her breasts as if they were being taken away....
She arches her back in pleasure, sliding in every direction knowing; I am losing my mind at the feeling of her wetness gliding onto my cock...
My god I scream, tease me no more!!
I push hard, fast and she loses the control she worked hard to maintain...
No more teasing, the pulse of surrender and orgasmic explosion is peaking...
Climaxing, she pulls my hair, I feel the pulsing within her walls, driving me to orgasm...
Moans loudly are not noticed, night has appeared, leaving colliding souls; with a tidal wave of lust and water, just as the shadows of dark creep in to cover their nakedness..
By: RFuller 5/14/14
Inspired by ACD with love :)
A silhouette of beauty takes my breathe,standing knee deep in the oceans current...
Eyes of sapphire blue, reflect like ice,in what's left of the suns rays, bouncing up off the water...
I try to watch unnoticed, but the beats of my heart trap me in frozen state, thoughts spoken outloud, remove me from hiding...
A stare that twists my mind calls to my soul, and I am drawn to her like honey...
Without even a thought, we are face to face with lips touching ever so softly...
She has the seductive powers to take from me, and I can do nothing to fight...
She calms my being with her hands, as they run down my chest and around to my lower back...
She causes chills to run up my spin, presses me deeper into the waves it covers our bodies...
Loosening strings, she removes the intimate cloth that covered her breasts, exposing her erect nipples from the coolness of the water...
The salty taste I can't help but crave against her sweetness...
More strings undone,our bottoms float away in front of my view; and I stiffen to fullness...
Pushing her naked body into mine, wrapping her legs around my waist, there are no words exchanged, but her sly seductive smile speaks volumes...
She pushes down deep onto me slowly, I gasp in awe of her warmth wetness for me...
Kissing her nipples, caressing her breasts as if they were being taken away....
She arches her back in pleasure, sliding in every direction knowing; I am losing my mind at the feeling of her wetness gliding onto my cock...
My god I scream, tease me no more!!
I push hard, fast and she loses the control she worked hard to maintain...
No more teasing, the pulse of surrender and orgasmic explosion is peaking...
Climaxing, she pulls my hair, I feel the pulsing within her walls, driving me to orgasm...
Moans loudly are not noticed, night has appeared, leaving colliding souls; with a tidal wave of lust and water, just as the shadows of dark creep in to cover their nakedness..
By: RFuller 5/14/14
Inspired by ACD with love :)
Published 15th May 2014
| Edited 16th May 2014
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15th May 2014 10:11pm
Despite the typos, beautiful, passionate, hot evening shoreside encounter is described. I am sure a few male readers have 'stiffened to fullness' reading this - for a woman you capture the man's side quite well. The poem's last lines make a poignant curtain to the drama.
The typos:
'hidding' - should be 'hiding'
'my waste' - should be 'my waist'
The typos:
'hidding' - should be 'hiding'
'my waste' - should be 'my waist'
16th May 2014 1:27am
re: Re: Beautiful Temptation
16th May 2014 6:28am
Understood. As I read it again I thought of a rhyming extension to the title:
Beautiful temptation
Spurs on copulation,
Twilight consummation
With great exultation.
Beautiful temptation
Spurs on copulation,
Twilight consummation
With great exultation.
16th May 2014 7:19pm
The shoe looks good on the other foot huh?!!!
Awesome write sweets!!
Love your pen!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesome write sweets!!
Love your pen!!
Sir Lancelott
16th May 2014 8:17pm
18th May 2014 12:31pm
I notice he was first lost in the reflection of her icy blue eyes, miss. We should all be careful of those! Leads to all types of naughtiness! Nice description and depiction, miss.
18th May 2014 9:55pm
22nd May 2014 6:36pm
22nd May 2014 6:42pm
22nd May 2014 11:05pm
If in the midst of passion, we fail to express...how can we say we are passionate?
Thank you :)
Thank you :)
