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Death cannot wait!?!
Please stop cutting me,
Words acting as knives,
Brings the blade closer,
And leaves me with less time,
Without you I can go on,
Just keep your distance,
I can't know your moving on,
Wanting you hurts me,
Your not leaving me alone,
The cuts are getting deeper,
I am beginning not to feel,
Life without you aches,
Death cannot wait,
You say you miss me,
But now your with them,
The blood on my arm,
Like vivid ink from a pen,
Slowly sinking without you,
Time to pack in it,
No love is worth this pain,
Death comes time to begin,
I think of you as I drift away,
No time left for me,
Even just a day,
I slip into this dark abyss,
This is my curtain call,
Death couldn't wait...
Words acting as knives,
Brings the blade closer,
And leaves me with less time,
Without you I can go on,
Just keep your distance,
I can't know your moving on,
Wanting you hurts me,
Your not leaving me alone,
The cuts are getting deeper,
I am beginning not to feel,
Life without you aches,
Death cannot wait,
You say you miss me,
But now your with them,
The blood on my arm,
Like vivid ink from a pen,
Slowly sinking without you,
Time to pack in it,
No love is worth this pain,
Death comes time to begin,
I think of you as I drift away,
No time left for me,
Even just a day,
I slip into this dark abyss,
This is my curtain call,
Death couldn't wait...
Published 22nd Mar 2011
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22nd Mar 2011 7:05pm
It sounds like you can read my emotions. I really like it. Continue to write wonderfully!!!!!
22nd Mar 2011 8:41pm
This is an outlet for expressing things probably that I can only put to paper, so thank you for your encouragement (:
5th Jul 2011 1:30pm
We congregate here and all over the web, building lives where we can pour our souls out on paper, on computers, into any form of words.
We dwell in dark places in our minds...our hearts... and so few understand it. Writing about what we feel is what keeps us alife. Without this here, this outlet, we would surely have taken the plunge.
I see myself in your words to a degree, but unlike you I have no desire to move on. To heal and be better. I am caught in a moment forever...
Thank you for this poem
We dwell in dark places in our minds...our hearts... and so few understand it. Writing about what we feel is what keeps us alife. Without this here, this outlet, we would surely have taken the plunge.
I see myself in your words to a degree, but unlike you I have no desire to move on. To heal and be better. I am caught in a moment forever...
Thank you for this poem
5th Jul 2011 11:07pm
Indeed I agree with all you say, is true having an outlet is incredibly important. I hope you can move on, I would hate to be in your situation, and I can myself see being caught in such a moment, so hope you will be ok :)
