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She takes great pride
Relishes each sensation
Nurturing, loving, caring
Through every day of gestation
From the first ultrasound
Revealing that faint, rapid heartbeat
To the gift of life, clutching
Tiny hands and feet
Always giving, sharing her all
Protection, adoration, direction when needed
Firm foundation shown
Focus on others, never conceited
Capable of unconditional love
We envy and wish to emulate
There's more to her than we'll ever know
The woman we wish to celebrate
On this, her special Mother's Day
*Eloquent words of "Proudly" by domore2014
reminded me of this, compelled me to share it*
Published 11th May 2014
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11th May 2014 7:37pm
Mister VP.. you had me in tears.. what a lovely tribute to Mother's... you captured the joy of motherhood perfectly in your ink :) that my words in any way played part in your expressing such..is with out a doubt..an honor.. with love and respect..xoxo domore
12th May 2014 00:55am
Ms D, thank you for expressing your feelings and appreciation. Honored by your reaction and RL nod.
My gratitude for your inspiring words penned in "Proudly." You reminded me of this, written two years ago for Mom.
I think it no coincidence, the title chosen so fitting. Do you agree Ms Do'more'? :)
XO
My gratitude for your inspiring words penned in "Proudly." You reminded me of this, written two years ago for Mom.
I think it no coincidence, the title chosen so fitting. Do you agree Ms Do'more'? :)
XO
12th May 2014 2:47am
:) I agree Mister VP... :) The title is perfect. you are too kind sir :)
with much respect to you.. :):):) domore
with much respect to you.. :):):) domore
11th May 2014 9:14pm
I agree with domore2014.....you moved me deeply....you are an amazing writer and thiss is an incredible work of art.
Love it!
Love it!
12th May 2014 1:01am
Thank you, Ms Lena. Your compliments, moving words and RL choice are sincerely appreciated.
Anonymous
11th May 2014 11:10pm
Great tribute from this wonderful ladies touching honor to her children. Splendid response to hers. Enjoyed! :)
12th May 2014 1:04am
Glad you enjoyed it, sweet flowergirl. Thank you.
It is as if Ms D had previously seen this piece.
It is as if Ms D had previously seen this piece.
15th May 2014 1:51pm
15th May 2014 3:53pm
Thank you, Ms Blackrose. I really appreciate you reading and sharing your comments. Honored.
xo
xo
