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Make Her Love You

Separate her from
persons who matter
Friends
Family
Advisers
Leave her standing alone.

Separate her from
Streams of consciousness of
thoughts
Feelings
Sensations
That flood her site of mind.
� � � � � �AND
Let you be
the only feeling organ in her brain
Arising her
Pleasure
joys
laughter
Tears.

Let you be
Her only awareness
Personal
Selective
Continuous
Changing
Throughout her life .

Let you be
Her mental representation of the world
While day - dreaming.
Cooling her blood to sleep
Warming it to wake her up .

� � � And then

Hypnotise her with

Sweet words
Loving words
Sexy words ,

Closing her eyelids
Warming her feet
Relaxing her muscles
Slowing her respiration
Letting her relinquishing more and more

Control of her

Perception
Thoughts
Behaviors
To you .

� �Then ...
Tell her " I love you. "

Written by mojado123

(mojado-123.)

Published 10th May 2014

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Re: Make Her Love You

scarletvelvet

- Edited 10th May 2014 6:35am

10th May 2014 6:27am

Truer words have never been spoken and I can relate to what you are expressing here -- there are those who are aware of what is going on and those who are not.... I count myself lucky to be in the former category because unless you are aware of what is going on, you will never be able to change anthing..... great poem on a very relevant topic and I have observed many a relationship with similar dynamics -- I don't believe it works long-term --obviously for a relationship to be healthy both people have to be able to meet the other on their own terms without being threatened, otherwise all kinds of resentments will come to the surface as well as dysfunctions... ♡♡♡ :)