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Intimacy
The day before
Two different bodies
Two appearances
Today
Two offered intimacies
The hidden is not any more hidden
The look of other one is not any more aggression
The body dropped the mask
I say myself then
That she was never so beautiful
That at the moment
At this precise moment
I love her as ever
I miss her because of her future absence
I love her forever
Published 8th May 2014
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"I miss her because of her future
absence"
j'aime cette ligne, Malin, elle traduit vraiment votre désir. un très beau poème, plein d'images sensuelles. j'apprécie.
absence"
j'aime cette ligne, Malin, elle traduit vraiment votre désir. un très beau poème, plein d'images sensuelles. j'apprécie.
8th May 2014 2:22pm
8th May 2014 10:35pm
Very beautiful -- sounds like you got to see her just as she is without any type of mask or veiling and when two people see each other that way it bespeaks of a very powerful and intense kind of intimacy.......
I hope your love will last forever...... :) ♡♡♡
P.S. Being a hopeless romantic I hope there will be no future absence.....
I hope your love will last forever...... :) ♡♡♡
P.S. Being a hopeless romantic I hope there will be no future absence.....
8th May 2014 11:11pm
