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Together
I see inside you
when your soul is inside mine,
heating each heartbeat...
Two glowing orbs
crashing as they collide;
No longer two skins,
In one love
we confide...
when your soul is inside mine,
heating each heartbeat...
Two glowing orbs
crashing as they collide;
No longer two skins,
In one love
we confide...
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Re: Together
5th May 2014 2:32pm
beautiful imagery per the usual Glass
sensual and dynamic, your love is ...
xx
sensual and dynamic, your love is ...
xx
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6th May 2014 00:19am
Re: Together
“According to Greek mythology,
humans were originally created with 4 arms, 4 legs and a head with 2 faces. Fearing their power, Zeus split them into two separate parts, condemning them to spend their lives in search for other halves.”
this is a quote about soul mates from Plato’s The Symposium ...
your poem gives hope that the other half is out there, searching equally as hard to collide in love.
loved this, Miss Glass
humans were originally created with 4 arms, 4 legs and a head with 2 faces. Fearing their power, Zeus split them into two separate parts, condemning them to spend their lives in search for other halves.”
this is a quote about soul mates from Plato’s The Symposium ...
your poem gives hope that the other half is out there, searching equally as hard to collide in love.
loved this, Miss Glass
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re: Re: Together
6th May 2014 00:21am
It is one of my most loved tales, I've kept it on my desktop forever.
There is always hope, without it, what do we have?
Thank you for reading me xx
There is always hope, without it, what do we have?
Thank you for reading me xx
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5th May 2014 3:58pm
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re: Re: Together
6th May 2014 00:23am
I love your little pictures in your messages Gabriel! Thank you for reading xx
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Anonymous
5th May 2014 11:51pm
Luving this simple powerful write. Very sexy and sensual. Enjoyed! :)
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6th May 2014 00:24am
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17th May 2014 5:26am
Heart beats as one souls merging as one being. Absolutely beautiful Heart of Glass
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24th May 2014 2:20am
He is a stunningly glowing soul... Still cannot believe he's mine. Makes writing beautiful things easy. Thanks BS xx