Disguise

Amazing. The way you speak and pause inspires me

Thank you! I've been working on my dilivery, it's not perfect yet but I'll get there! Lol thank you for taking the time to comment.

You're right, I haven't started spoken word yet, but I get the delivery thing. Yours is gonna get better, but the content is solid. You can really sense the emotion.

Thank you. If I record a poem It's because I'm proud of myself and the content. However, I know my delivery needs work. Each poem takes me about an hour to record because I keep doing retakes. Sometimes I'm still not happy with the finished product. I'm sure that the more I upload, the better I'll get. My favorite artist are then ones who demand your emotions. One day I'll do the same :) thanks for taking the time to watch and comment. Greatly appreciated

Spit that shit. Good Job

Thank you thank you :)

wow! that was good the wording and delivery captured what you were saying perfectly. my hats off to you

Awww thank you soo much

you blew my mind, like i felt that and i could relate to it, we have similar struggles.

Really? I love when people can relate to my poetry.

This is dope! Nice work, great delivery.

I was not going to comment on this, but I decided to watch it and it was amazing. your words are true.

Nice.timing a little off

Captured my attention from the get go and beautiful delivery

Thank you so much

Wow!IS the only thing I can say. Very heart felt. Everything was great. The way you delivered and the timing was great. Do they still have def poets around? That is where you need to be.

Awwww thank you that's means a lot to me. I do perform on stage every once in a while

Anger casts a tall shadow and hangs over ones head like an eclipse when we need a ray of sunshine most. Powerful words!
JJ

total natural.....your delivery is spot on and you ooze charisma all the way through!

Great Job!

B