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falling (haiku)

how many feathers
fell from your wings as you dived
into the ocean

Written by penguin_eater

Published 2nd May 2014

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Re: falling (haiku)

2nd May 2014 2:44pm

I like these Japanese Haiku...

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Re: falling (haiku)

3rd May 2014 00:18am

All but one (deep thoughts) :)

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Re: falling (haiku)

18th May 2014 8:52pm

the same as when I dived into the sea

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