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cute

i'm not crazy,
I just think you'd look cuter
with this knife
lodged in your neck.

Written by penguin_eater

Published 28th Apr 2014

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Re: cute

28th Apr 2014 9:45pm

Short and sarcastic. I like it!
-Lissie

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Re: cute

Anonymous

29th Apr 2014 1:25am

hahaha I love this!!!

Re: cute

Anonymous

21st Jun 2014 4:51pm

Yes...wouldnt that be lovely :) simple, short and sweet but powerful. Great job!

Re: cute

22nd Jun 2014 6:45pm

Ahahah! I imagine a smile come from you at the end of this...

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Re: cute

28th Jun 2014 5:36am

This is a terrible poem...but it was good!

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