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Walls Speak
Am I not good enough?
I am creative!
I am flow!
I am unique!
I am deep!
I am true!
Or do I just want to be?
I lost myself in the void,
Not sure what my name is anymore.
Broke a sacred promise,
Now afraid to show my own skin.
Sleep eludes me,
I'm addicted to melatonin.
Comparing myself to other,
I'm not good enough.
Am I not good enough?
I hide myself!
I ignore me!
I help you!
I am we,
No longer us.
I want to be me!
Problem is:
Which one?
Am I not good enough?
Do I want to be a mirror?
A husk?
A rebel?
A deadman?
I don't know anymore.
Which one will make me loved?
Which one will make me love?
Which one will make me recognized?
Which one will make me me?
I am creative!
I am flow!
I am unique!
I am deep!
I am true!
Or do I just want to be?
I lost myself in the void,
Not sure what my name is anymore.
Broke a sacred promise,
Now afraid to show my own skin.
Sleep eludes me,
I'm addicted to melatonin.
Comparing myself to other,
I'm not good enough.
Am I not good enough?
I hide myself!
I ignore me!
I help you!
I am we,
No longer us.
I want to be me!
Problem is:
Which one?
Am I not good enough?
Do I want to be a mirror?
A husk?
A rebel?
A deadman?
I don't know anymore.
Which one will make me loved?
Which one will make me love?
Which one will make me recognized?
Which one will make me me?
Published 27th Apr 2014
| Edited 1st May 2014
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27th Apr 2014 6:33pm
The content really speaks and I relate to it. Your writing style always stands out – like something excellent. It’s really tight and always nicely penned.
27th Apr 2014 8:53pm
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26th Jun 2014 8:44am
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26th Jun 2014 1:39pm
I'm not sure how to react with some of my lies being compared to Mr. Manson. He was smart, and systematic. A lot can be learned from what he's done.
I feel flattered you want to take me to broke back mountain. However, I would have to decline for several reasons. I do not feel comfortable traveling with someone I do not know, personally. I am most likely taken at this moment. And I'm pretty busy this summer. I do not agree with your 3 sacred things, especially because the pursuit of happiness refers to one's right to buy property.
Thank you.
That advice was very helpful and enlightening. Thank you for bring my attention to it.
And thank you for that piece of advice too.
Have a nice day and thank you for commenting.
I feel flattered you want to take me to broke back mountain. However, I would have to decline for several reasons. I do not feel comfortable traveling with someone I do not know, personally. I am most likely taken at this moment. And I'm pretty busy this summer. I do not agree with your 3 sacred things, especially because the pursuit of happiness refers to one's right to buy property.
Thank you.
That advice was very helpful and enlightening. Thank you for bring my attention to it.
And thank you for that piece of advice too.
Have a nice day and thank you for commenting.
