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Einstein
Sometimes, my love calls me "my Einstein"
I am blushing to be compared to the most genious
In the world, after the awesome wheel inventor
But sometimes also, my genious is transformed
In stupidity and then I need to hide under ground
I am like a bull in a china shop, and she laughs!
Published 27th Apr 2014
| Edited 28th Apr 2014
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- Edited 27th Apr 2014 4:01am
27th Apr 2014 2:58am
An amusing write. LOL!!! Thank you for the laugh and the smile together. :)
27th Apr 2014 10:14am
Proud to get this result! Just the purpose of this little poem. Without any claim to produce a wonderful poem!
27th Apr 2014 6:08am
I really enjoyed this poem! I can't tell if in the first verse she is talking and in the second he is? Anyway great little poem! ;) ♡♡♡
27th Apr 2014 10:18am
No, I am always talking in this poem. I am really impressed to be compared to this genious! I have three genious in reference in my mind : J.S. BACH, A. EINSTEIN and the mysterious wheel inventor. To be compared to one is incredible, even I know it is a joke!
Thank you for your nice comment, Scarlett.
Thank you for your nice comment, Scarlett.
Anonymous
28th Apr 2014 2:13am
Loving this... we are all both wizard and jester...
I think scarlet may have been confused because of the pronoun "he" instead of "she" in this line:
"And I am blushing because he is the most genious"
I think scarlet may have been confused because of the pronoun "he" instead of "she" in this line:
"And I am blushing because he is the most genious"
28th Apr 2014 6:46am
I have changed the sentence to avoid ambiguousness. Thank you PM to read my poem and for your nice comments!
28th Apr 2014 10:27pm
28th Apr 2014 10:53pm
