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Nightly Vibes...
It keeps me up at night..
When I'm trying to find Warmth & Comfort laid up tight.
In covers wrapping my Soul fabric sewing Memories & Truth,
Why is Sexy Creole lingering in my dreams sitting by me grazing dark jeans?
Words failing my description
is this some sort of Prediction?
It's quite involuntary soaking my Moon Waves,
hormones below my waist almost asking to be saved..
of the Sexual torture I'm diggin' my grave.
Lost in some Galaxy of Submissive space,
traveling light years across Brown Sugah pores upon a face.
It reflects in my eyes drowning of thought,
condemned to Carbon more often than Sensibility..
Restless on mornings after seasoning my agility.
Spices mixing with Amber & Ginger,
Cinnamon Ambrosia raining my skin..
Lightening synapses transmitting energy willing to begin before my days end.
When I'm trying to find Warmth & Comfort laid up tight.
In covers wrapping my Soul fabric sewing Memories & Truth,
Why is Sexy Creole lingering in my dreams sitting by me grazing dark jeans?
Words failing my description
is this some sort of Prediction?
It's quite involuntary soaking my Moon Waves,
hormones below my waist almost asking to be saved..
of the Sexual torture I'm diggin' my grave.
Lost in some Galaxy of Submissive space,
traveling light years across Brown Sugah pores upon a face.
It reflects in my eyes drowning of thought,
condemned to Carbon more often than Sensibility..
Restless on mornings after seasoning my agility.
Spices mixing with Amber & Ginger,
Cinnamon Ambrosia raining my skin..
Lightening synapses transmitting energy willing to begin before my days end.
Written by
DivinityHoneycomb
Published 25th Apr 2014
| Edited 26th Apr 2014
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Re: Nightly vibes...
26th Apr 2014 2:17am
....yousa' sexy thang with the nightly vibes goin' on. :) Loving the rhyming flow...
I got hung up on "hormones under my stomach almost asking to be saved" Loved it's intent, but 'stomach' took away the sexiness in the line..
maybe...'hormones below my waist, asking to be saved.'
Oh hell, what do I know! Nevertheless, enjoyed this HoneyC ! Xo
I got hung up on "hormones under my stomach almost asking to be saved" Loved it's intent, but 'stomach' took away the sexiness in the line..
maybe...'hormones below my waist, asking to be saved.'
Oh hell, what do I know! Nevertheless, enjoyed this HoneyC ! Xo
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re: Re: Nightly vibes...
26th Apr 2014 8:11pm
Haha Aww why thank you, I'm flattered by your words & visit:D!
Hmmmm you are right. You know i felt the same but waist was the farthest from my mind, I shall edit that cause that adjustment sounds so much better. Pleased you enjoyed Rain!!
Hmmmm you are right. You know i felt the same but waist was the farthest from my mind, I shall edit that cause that adjustment sounds so much better. Pleased you enjoyed Rain!!
Re: Nightly Vibes...
27th Apr 2014 4:19am
Right on with the sensual imagery n rhythmic flow in this ink!!
Definitely can see your poetic voice holds power... Impressed I am lady :)
Definitely can see your poetic voice holds power... Impressed I am lady :)
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re: Re: Nightly Vibes...
27th Apr 2014 5:29am
Glad it can be seen, there must always be a flow.
Thank You..Awww happy i can impress someone as talented as you!=)
Thank You..Awww happy i can impress someone as talented as you!=)
Re: Nightly Vibes...
27th Apr 2014 7:58am
waist deep mm lol..i enjoyed this ms, that cry of help I can picture it clearly
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re: Re: Nightly Vibes...
28th Apr 2014 7:13am
Hahah ohh stop insinuating on my hips! Well thank you for reading. Mmmm i bet you could, happy my words visualize!!;D
Re: Nightly Vibes...
27th Apr 2014 10:09am
the tension vibrates in your poem. needing that sexual release that brings euphoric peace...
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re: Re: Nightly Vibes...
28th Apr 2014 7:15am
Why Thank You, love when you leave your poetic words. Yes indeed, you said what i was trying to express!
Re: Nightly Vibes...
29th Apr 2014 3:33am
Hey Ms. Honeycomb that was sexy sweets!!
Great read!!
Beautiful write!!
Love your mind!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great read!!
Beautiful write!!
Love your mind!!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Nightly Vibes...
30th Apr 2014 1:35am
Re: Nightly Vibes...
29th Apr 2014 4:58am
re: Re: Nightly Vibes...
30th Apr 2014 1:46am
Hmmmm well i highly doubt dumb..we all can be numb but, I'd like to say its found in a place of surrendering to the complexity of what we feel..whatever that is Realizing it's limitless & allowing it to cover you & i express it in word?...Ha i hope that can suffice!
Re: Nightly Vibes...
29th Apr 2014 2:46pm
Damnnnnn - look who's talking about rhyming flow- this is beautiful!!! Wow....wow.....
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re: Re: Nightly Vibes...
30th Apr 2014 1:50am
Hahah I'm trying to learn from you! Thank You so much, you humble me..Muchly appreciate the RL Add=)!!
Re: Nightly Vibes...
30th Apr 2014 4:16pm
Nicely done! youve got a nice sensual flow. This poem shows a lot of depth. very intriguing.
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re: Re: Nightly Vibes...
30th Apr 2014 9:54pm
Thank You so much!! Yes i try to soak depth in whatever i write..I'm not one for shallow verses!
Appreciate you reading!
Appreciate you reading!
Re: Nightly Vibes...
2nd Jul 2014 5:41am
Wow that was one of the most passionate, sexually charged poems I've ever read. It had taste and it had passion.
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