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Tonight
You are the one for me.
Only with you I want to be.
And your body I must to see!
You are so hot - a dream
On you I want to cream.
So cum to me my love.
Into you my cock I'll shove.
This is a movie, sex is the plot.
Tonight, my dick in your slot.
Nothing else me consoles...
Let me fill all your holes!
Only with you I want to be.
And your body I must to see!
You are so hot - a dream
On you I want to cream.
So cum to me my love.
Into you my cock I'll shove.
This is a movie, sex is the plot.
Tonight, my dick in your slot.
Nothing else me consoles...
Let me fill all your holes!
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Re: Tonight <span style=
25th Apr 2014 6:23am
Not that extreme...and not that serious either. Still, I do not want to offend anyone.
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Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 00:44am
Well.......? :)
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It was a pornographic poem. No one seemed to like it... Don't know what else I should post. Running low on inspiration.
Edit: But I got a like so it's back. :)
Edit: But I got a like so it's back. :)
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Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 1:16am
I didn't even get to read it. PM it to me if you want to. :)
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Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 1:23am
Brilliant! I luv it. Nothing wrong with this at all. Sexy and luring. Thank you for putting it back for me to read. Good visual. Mmmmmmm! :)
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Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 1:33am
Don't deprive me again Mister!!!!!!! LOL!!! Xo :)
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Re: Tonight
26th Apr 2014 1:34am
Hot ink No1 I'm glad you put it back as well it takes me time to get round to all my reads.. this is a delicious sensual write :) with love Crim
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26th Apr 2014 1:43am
Thanks a lot! I usually don't write erotic poems but I've written a few romantic ones. <3