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Another Thought (A Secret House Poem)
Hated by my own mother.
Betrayed my own father.
Told to kill my own sister.
The real question is:
What's the point anymore?
Betrayed my own father.
Told to kill my own sister.
The real question is:
What's the point anymore?
Published 21st Apr 2014
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25th Apr 2014 3:38am
Love the assonance in the first couple lines- It really rolls off the tongue. This work has the dual quality of clarity and profound mystery. It seemed rather sincere.
25th Apr 2014 4:30am
Thank you. It was based off a character from the book I am writing. There is a similar poem called "A Thought (A Secret House Poem)" making this one the second in maybe a series of tiny poems written in the voice of this particular character. I am glad you enjoyed it though.
- Paige Rider
- Paige Rider
26th Apr 2014 10:04pm
27th Apr 2014 11:35am
24th May 2014 10:50pm
24th May 2014 11:43pm
Thank you, it's based off a character's life in the book I am currently writing.
- Paige Rider
- Paige Rider
