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people and stars
countless stars
the cliché goes
make you feel
small
but no one
on the street
says hello
the cliché goes
make you feel
small
but no one
on the street
says hello
Published 19th Apr 2014
| Edited 13th Apr 2020
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19th Apr 2014 10:35am
if people were stars, piggies
would'ave wings, flying their
succulent bacons to direct
consummation...wit no middle
men.........
& thus maketh fine little poom....wit it's end
hangin'out
19th Apr 2014 2:17pm
I adore the mood creation of this small piece. effective!.. n been there often on those skies, streets n heard indifference.
24th Apr 2014 6:14am
20th Apr 2014 6:23am
