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Sight & SeeingThis In God's Cuntree
under the overbearing
end'o
things as things they
stand
to be,
ripe as can be fallin
from
god can only make[a]tree,
once & for
ever should be nigh on
enough
is enough already for
you
becoming me became'o
wee
thinking wee saw what
wee
thought wee had seen.....
theeeeevidence precludes
itself for th'sake of sum
broader view, though none,
not-a-one, is even looking
to see such seeing sights,
& thus wee set the scene
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dkzk---nonsenseOfPureSense,Sensibly2014
end'o
things as things they
stand
to be,
ripe as can be fallin
from
god can only make[a]tree,
once & for
ever should be nigh on
enough
is enough already for
you
becoming me became'o
wee
thinking wee saw what
wee
thought wee had seen.....
theeeeevidence precludes
itself for th'sake of sum
broader view, though none,
not-a-one, is even looking
to see such seeing sights,
& thus wee set the scene
_________________________________________
dkzk---nonsenseOfPureSense,Sensibly2014
Published 19th Apr 2014
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19th Apr 2014 5:56am
19th Apr 2014 10:20am
19th Apr 2014 11:35am
ah, the forest of arden...and yes,
I can think of a few little puns
regarding that..:)
I can think of a few little puns
regarding that..:)
19th Apr 2014 12:33pm
19th Apr 2014 3:22pm
Trees are dangerous things indeed, especially those bearing fruits... think gravity ...
Oh no photo in this poem?
Oh no photo in this poem?
19th Apr 2014 3:50pm
tree\
fruit\
juice\
ozzin\
I get an OOPS thing everytime I do the foto drill & hit 'submit'....last 2 pooms
maybe they sick of my pretentious imagery
fruit\
juice\
ozzin\
I get an OOPS thing everytime I do the foto drill & hit 'submit'....last 2 pooms
maybe they sick of my pretentious imagery
20th Apr 2014 5:18pm
Oh I get an OOPS too. They had enough of poets trying to be photographers ... ;)
22nd Apr 2014 3:23am
well,
if I canno post my profound pxtrs, I may have to quit all this artsy fartsy
shit
& take up
neurosurgery as a hobby...practice on myself....
jeez, wouldn't THAT be COOL ?
if I canno post my profound pxtrs, I may have to quit all this artsy fartsy
shit
& take up
neurosurgery as a hobby...practice on myself....
jeez, wouldn't THAT be COOL ?
22nd Apr 2014 11:20am
If DUP as a medium can't function anymore for your poetry writing, then yes, you will need another medium. Your own brain is a good choice. I'd like to be your apprentice. Kiss.
22nd Apr 2014 11:30am
o,
dearly beloved.....
my 'own brain' has gotten me no
where
in
this world/life---
but so sweet of ye to say so!
dearly beloved.....
my 'own brain' has gotten me no
where
in
this world/life---
but so sweet of ye to say so!
22nd Apr 2014 11:43am
