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All over
We werent meant to last so long
not meant to grow so close.
We werent meant to sooth our hearts
not meant to shape our souls.
We werent meant to play a role
in the togetherness of life.
Never meant to have much more
but sheets soaked with stifled sighs.
not meant to grow so close.
We werent meant to sooth our hearts
not meant to shape our souls.
We werent meant to play a role
in the togetherness of life.
Never meant to have much more
but sheets soaked with stifled sighs.
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Re: All over
19th Apr 2014 1:07am
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Thanks for welcoming me back, dear Paul.
No, we never know what time brings.
Or takes.
No, we never know what time brings.
Or takes.
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19th Apr 2014 1:18am
Was thinking about you today and wondering where was Miss Chi ???
good to see you here holding court again
good to see you here holding court again
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19th Apr 2014 1:25am
Ah, Speak! Good to see you here!
Miss Chi was absorbed in work and woe.
Thank you for your kind words :-).
Miss Chi was absorbed in work and woe.
Thank you for your kind words :-).
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19th Apr 2014 1:39am
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19th Apr 2014 4:57pm
Dear Sara, glad you could connect :-). It's the same with me, reading your pieces! Thank you!
Re: All over
19th Apr 2014 2:43am
beautiful as a song, Chi. love grows like an oak, from a simple seed...
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19th Apr 2014 5:06pm
Is it this you see from it? I'm glad you can look at it from that angle, too, since the seed of love had been outlayed nonetheless, though not intentionally.
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19th Apr 2014 7:16am
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19th Apr 2014 5:08pm
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19th Apr 2014 8:55am
The title is tantalising. It could be read more than one way - as a break-up ballad (sense of 'it's all over') or a togetherness tale of a couple who end up in bed together ('all over each other' literally) after an unpromising start to the relationship. (The latter was the sense I read it in.)
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19th Apr 2014 5:22pm
And as a break-up ballad it was meant, with the knowledge that a promising thing like love will have no place between illegitimate sheets.
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Anonymous
19th Apr 2014 10:31am
Those sighs in the end, can be breaking a long silence, much is in the weight of a sigh...
Sadly so...
Sadly so...

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19th Apr 2014 5:25pm
The heavyness of a sigh can weigh you down so thoroughly, you'll never ever get up anymore. Yes, that's sad ...
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19th Apr 2014 3:19pm
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19th Apr 2014 5:26pm
Back again, yes, Poe. Thank you for your support and your kind words. Happy, you're here, too.
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19th Apr 2014 9:30pm
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20th Apr 2014 8:58pm
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21st Apr 2014 00:54am
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21st Apr 2014 7:43pm
Great piece Miss Chi!!!
Love the read and write!!
Welcome home!!
Sir Lancelott
Love the read and write!!
Welcome home!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: All over
22nd Apr 2014 7:20am
Thank you so much, Lance!
Glad you like the piece and even gladder that you so kindly welcomed me back!
Glad you like the piece and even gladder that you so kindly welcomed me back!
Re: All over
23rd Apr 2014 1:45am
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23rd Apr 2014 7:46am
You captured the message perfectly, dear J. It's not exactly what it looks like but some things have to come to an end, sooner or later.