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The Three Haikus of Love
Haiku 1
falling leaves on autumn evening
soft crystal jade on tip of hardness
impaled blossom with quivering petals
Haiku 2
blue sky seen from windows
breathy mouth wet lips between sweet thighs
moans like fragrance on tatami
Haiku 3
snow falling on twin hills
caressing fingers warmth the yearning moisture within
freeing orbs, for greedy lips
falling leaves on autumn evening
soft crystal jade on tip of hardness
impaled blossom with quivering petals
Haiku 2
blue sky seen from windows
breathy mouth wet lips between sweet thighs
moans like fragrance on tatami
Haiku 3
snow falling on twin hills
caressing fingers warmth the yearning moisture within
freeing orbs, for greedy lips
Published 18th Apr 2014
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18th Apr 2014 4:22am
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18th Apr 2014 6:06pm
Grace, this does not follow the 5-7-5 rule, but your words have such a lovely flow, well done here.
19th Apr 2014 1:33am
sw9618 :) thank you...yes I thought I would use words instead of sounds. Its an experiment really. Thank you so much for reading and actually noticing.
19th Apr 2014 1:34am
Thank you dear Glynis...lovely to see your here and your haikus are so much better. But kind words from you, as usual.
19th Apr 2014 00:02am
Such Beautiful Haiku's Dear Grace-exquisite!!!
Good Luck in the comp.!!!
Good Luck in the comp.!!!
19th Apr 2014 1:35am
I dont think I will win, Soul. Mine are not conventional haikus but I love writing and getting inspired from competitions as you know. Thanks for being here with me.
