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demused
My psyche's getting antsy
I need a muse
It's been too long
And my heart craves
The waves of obsession
The insatiable fixation
And the bleeding of my pen
For a love that'll never last
Beyond the spilling of this ink
(C) Indie Adams 2014
I need a muse
It's been too long
And my heart craves
The waves of obsession
The insatiable fixation
And the bleeding of my pen
For a love that'll never last
Beyond the spilling of this ink
(C) Indie Adams 2014
Published 17th Apr 2014
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17th Apr 2014 1:25am
very relatable ink Indie.. I've felt that obsession and the never ending ability to write about said muse but for now nothing.. sigh.. insightful ink.. with love and respect Crim
17th Apr 2014 5:15am
I sensed anticipation and excitement like a kid(or that Ketchup commercial) by your poem
And an interesting concept, meeting a person, falling in love with them, and breaking up in sixty seven and a half seconds.
I think somebody said it takes twice the time that you were in love to get over it, so that means you will be ready to love again in three minutes,twenty two and a half seconds.
cheers
And an interesting concept, meeting a person, falling in love with them, and breaking up in sixty seven and a half seconds.
I think somebody said it takes twice the time that you were in love to get over it, so that means you will be ready to love again in three minutes,twenty two and a half seconds.
cheers
17th Apr 2014 7:43pm
Know that feeling; when it stops to hurt/irritate/anger, what is there to write about? It's something I know. I always remember the line in the wedding date
'Go ahead, hate me. I think you're running out of steam on the last reason you don't have relationships.'
I'm paraphrasing.
Of course, I could have read this wrong and got entirely the wrong end of the stick. Liked it nonetheless :)
LL x
'Go ahead, hate me. I think you're running out of steam on the last reason you don't have relationships.'
I'm paraphrasing.
Of course, I could have read this wrong and got entirely the wrong end of the stick. Liked it nonetheless :)
LL x
19th Apr 2014 5:47am
