Deviant Alice

beautiful Crim...this is deep vivid imagery thru the looking glass.. with love and respect.. xoxo domore

thank you kindly :) with love Crim

I love this poem its not easy but every day is a battle like losing a loved one only time will heal haha

yes everyday is a battle not to miss heroin thank you for getting this write :) with love Crim

An interesting take on a story done to death. A whirlwind actually, skilfully done. Thank you for the read.

I'm still just a child at heart thus my fascination with Wonderland or Drug Land as I see it.. thank you Missy for the gracious comment.. with respect Crim :)

thank you

<3 wonderful! mind if i share with a few friends? (of course giving credit to you lol)

thank you lovely lady of course share it with your friends I'd be honored.. with love Crim

Yeah fuck that dormouse, he only ever slept...

Original twist on Alice and the crew, Crim!

thank you kindly Atakti :) with love Crim

You pull us right down that rabbit hole with you...into crim's wonderland (peace to you)

thank you Hash for the visit :) with love Crim

Oh lady, this ink is marvelous! :) So creative Crim! Really love reading this...Xo

thank you lovely Rain :) with love Crim

Lovely Brenda, this is original, masterful, an illicit fantasy, sobering!  BRAVO!

thank you VP :) with love Crim

This is such a wonderfully crafted piece... I love the ride and imagery you've forged on the back of a well known story... Relatable xx

thank you lovely one :) with love Crim

Brenda this is testimony to your genius. love the remix!

thank you most graciously beautiful Katja :) with love Brenda

wonderland was never really a fairytale; go ask Alice...

thank you John yes Wonderland is a trip love the song reference :) with love Crim

A new meaning to Alice in Wonderland. . .Vivid imagery, very well penned, Crim!. . .With Respect, Devlin

thank you Devlin :) with respect Crim

A great take on Alice and her wonderful land haha.
Also a great portrayal of the effects of a high.

Wonderful Crim. :)

thank you kindly Magdalena glad to make you laugh :) with love Crim

unique and clever, what a wondrous read.  Your pen flows with a different color.

thank you Soul I always love your visits :) with love Crim

I love how you used Alice In Wonderland! Good job :)

thank you kindly :) with love Crim

varrryyy noooiiicceee

thank you :) with love Crim

So good ,

thank you kindly lovely one :) with love Crim

Wwwwhhoooaaa, dark but very seriously creative

thank you kindly Poe :) with love Crim

Weird and wonderful

thank you kindly :) with love Crim

When your imagination wonders.....it's marvelous!! Xo :)

thank you lovely Flower :) with love Crim

Wish I was there Crim - can get buck arsed boring in reality - keep the faith tho

I wish I was there too.. we'll keep the faith though.. thank you Whale :) with love Crim

im sorry miss
but im not here to lie to anyone.
i found the alice in wonder land thing, to be very tired. and i harbor a great deal of cynicism for those that forget their own imagination, and rely on that instead.

im sure u can do better, make ur own world, reflect on ur own memories from that smoked out time, i feel u weaken ur own influence as a writer, by leaning on the cattapillars pipe.

however there was a fucking good line in here (im not just here to put u down, if thats what u think) concerning the cock/lock situation.
and i do like the absurdity of the poem before the come down.

anyway this is just my opinion, its not right and its not wrong, its mine.
if ur happy, thats all that matters.

x

thank you for you honest critique.. with respect Crim