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Words of love
Words.
In expert hands.
Manipulate deftly.
Enthralling you,
Cutting into,
Your life.
Strangling your thoughts.
Winding,
Ropes of spider silk,
Around your heart.
Working,
Magic.
Imprisoning you.
In expert hands.
Manipulate deftly.
Enthralling you,
Cutting into,
Your life.
Strangling your thoughts.
Winding,
Ropes of spider silk,
Around your heart.
Working,
Magic.
Imprisoning you.
Published 15th Apr 2014
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15th Apr 2014 7:22pm
Imprisoning or freeing you...depends on what point you find the will to break out..with deft words of your own......
15th Apr 2014 8:47pm
I was thinking of being trapped by love --or by the words of love, if not the fact itself. It might be a willing entrapment. Even a freely welcomed entrapment. It might be a two way entrapment. But still - - -
Jay
Jay
Anonymous
15th Apr 2014 7:36pm
I love the descriptive words you used. Nicely penned.
15th Apr 2014 8:49pm
Thank you for your kind words --and taking the time to write them. I very much appreciate that you took those moments.
Jay
Jay
10th May 2014 10:57pm
Why can so few words say so much? One of the wonders of the human quality of language, and you used it well.
28th May 2014 8:33pm
1st Jun 2017 5:09am
this has a very indirect and weak sense of romance. I like the small references to romance with "love" and "heart" though.
1st Jun 2017 8:20pm
