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My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
You have destroyed my shelter
You have taken my identity
You have covered my world in darkness
Paved with cold stones
dirty and naughty
I am safe under your umbrella
Your protection holds me
As life has torn through mine
I am content within your bindings
With you I am free
You are woven deep inside me
chained and held to your every ambition
I dangle in your light
A woman shimmering
A part of you I have no reflection
I lay open in need
For your darkness to wrap around me
Bend me to your wicked desires
Leave me breathless
Tongue contorting ecstasy
Invade my every emotion
Fill me with your loving compassion
I bleed for your control
This copper tone landscape
Hungers for your passion
Frayed mind of leather ends
Pulsating organs shake on command
Release by your skillful touch
Enriched inner moans
Waiting for your demand
Pounded into submission
Used in the most delicious ways
I am floating beyond the edge
Spiritually orgasmic dreamland
In complete euphoric ecstasy
Through your eyes
I never imagined this to be
A picture of heaven on earth
Freedom by your touch
It is truly heavenly
You have taken my identity
You have covered my world in darkness
Paved with cold stones
dirty and naughty
I am safe under your umbrella
Your protection holds me
As life has torn through mine
I am content within your bindings
With you I am free
You are woven deep inside me
chained and held to your every ambition
I dangle in your light
A woman shimmering
A part of you I have no reflection
I lay open in need
For your darkness to wrap around me
Bend me to your wicked desires
Leave me breathless
Tongue contorting ecstasy
Invade my every emotion
Fill me with your loving compassion
I bleed for your control
This copper tone landscape
Hungers for your passion
Frayed mind of leather ends
Pulsating organs shake on command
Release by your skillful touch
Enriched inner moans
Waiting for your demand
Pounded into submission
Used in the most delicious ways
I am floating beyond the edge
Spiritually orgasmic dreamland
In complete euphoric ecstasy
Through your eyes
I never imagined this to be
A picture of heaven on earth
Freedom by your touch
It is truly heavenly
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Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
15th Apr 2014 4:42pm
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15th Apr 2014 6:25pm
Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
15th Apr 2014 4:56pm
"I am floating beyond the edge
Spiritually orgasmic dreamland"
That vision and the copper tone scape.. Damn it's so dreamy.. Good luck. You awaken hunger :)
Spiritually orgasmic dreamland"
That vision and the copper tone scape.. Damn it's so dreamy.. Good luck. You awaken hunger :)
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re: Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
15th Apr 2014 6:28pm
Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
15th Apr 2014 4:59pm
re: Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
15th Apr 2014 6:28pm
Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
15th Apr 2014 5:57pm
this has such an ethereal feel to it, A.S.
best of luck, the judges seem to have their work cut out for them.
best of luck, the judges seem to have their work cut out for them.
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15th Apr 2014 6:33pm
You are so right, I wished I used that word (ethereal) in my ink....The judges do have some work to do
Thank you Shadoe
Thank you Shadoe
Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
15th Apr 2014 8:03pm
you are indeed a master of the pen.. I willingly submit to such a read as this! excellent work!
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re: Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
16th Apr 2014 1:17pm
Let thy whispers of my words
bend your pretty little knees
forever let them echo
in your erotic fantasies
Thank you so much Domore
bend your pretty little knees
forever let them echo
in your erotic fantasies
Thank you so much Domore
Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
16th Apr 2014 8:12am
Breathless... beautiful writing AW.
You are woven deep inside me
chained and held to your every ambition
I dangle in your light
A woman shimmering
A part of you I have no reflection
So gentle and spellbinding xx
You are woven deep inside me
chained and held to your every ambition
I dangle in your light
A woman shimmering
A part of you I have no reflection
So gentle and spellbinding xx
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re: Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
16th Apr 2014 1:19pm
Heart of Glass, thank you for such a wonderful comment, I treasure your visits
Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
Anonymous
18th Apr 2014 7:45am
Whew! I'm sweating after this read. Very expressive erotic. Enjoyed very very much. :)
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re: Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
18th Apr 2014 2:20pm
It thrills me that it captured you and carried you away for a moment. Thank you always Flower
Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
18th Apr 2014 2:50pm
Oh yes! I can totally relate to this.many time have I been there, floating beyond the edge in complete euphoric ecstasy. .. my spirit knows of this heavenly experience. Beautiful write! You captured it perfectly.
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18th Apr 2014 7:46pm
Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
29th Apr 2014 7:00pm
This poem was truly incredible Soul. You captured the essence of the image and all it embodied. Thanks for the entry...Xo
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re: Re: My heaven (Int. art comp) Held by Rain
29th Apr 2014 7:07pm
The pleasure will always remain mine for I sway in the ripples of your wake, lucky to have such a presence read my work.