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waiting in line
I would rather not have something
I want
If it means waiting in line
For more than 20 seconds
Tried and true New Yorker
Impatient, brooder, no fault moody
The one and only thing I wait for
Is you -- you get a pass everytime
I want
If it means waiting in line
For more than 20 seconds
Tried and true New Yorker
Impatient, brooder, no fault moody
The one and only thing I wait for
Is you -- you get a pass everytime
Published 12th Apr 2014
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Anonymous
12th Apr 2014 5:46pm
Ooooooo! Just like a theme park, where can I get a multi line ticket? LOL!!! Enjoyed this sweet write. :)
12th Apr 2014 6:03pm
13th Apr 2014 3:07am
I hope I always get a free pass with you because I guarantee I need one oh impatient one :) with love Brenda
13th Apr 2014 4:33am
13th Apr 2014 11:43am
Simply brilliant! - a love poem that isn't over saturated is truly a gift.
13th Apr 2014 12:25pm
13th Apr 2014 1:37pm
Honest and sweet words... whomever you give pass..is indeed a lucky one :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
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