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Unsated Love !!!
I am a starved soul
hungering for your precious love
Urging to walk your steps
without any visible trace.
I am a trail of fire
you, an eternal flame
Light me up instantly
being my savior in strain.
I am a faded wall
your favorite hitting game
Searing the pain all over
my flesh shrieks your name.
I am a dried leaf
blushing secretly to the book
Tangling with alphabets
for you might give a mercy look.
I am that lost child
who gave you all in vain
nesting in shambles
the spirit has accepted its fate.
I am a dull tack
you, a sharp dagger
thrust into my tender skin
and make me yours forever.
hungering for your precious love
Urging to walk your steps
without any visible trace.
I am a trail of fire
you, an eternal flame
Light me up instantly
being my savior in strain.
I am a faded wall
your favorite hitting game
Searing the pain all over
my flesh shrieks your name.
I am a dried leaf
blushing secretly to the book
Tangling with alphabets
for you might give a mercy look.
I am that lost child
who gave you all in vain
nesting in shambles
the spirit has accepted its fate.
I am a dull tack
you, a sharp dagger
thrust into my tender skin
and make me yours forever.
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Re: Unsated Love !!!
12th Apr 2014 6:53am
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12th Apr 2014 6:59am
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12th Apr 2014 7:52am
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12th Apr 2014 9:28am
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12th Apr 2014 1:09pm
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12th Apr 2014 7:19pm
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Anonymous
12th Apr 2014 2:35pm
Brilliant! I felt the emotion thru this. Enjoyed! :)
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12th Apr 2014 7:20pm
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12th Apr 2014 3:12pm
I've been wondering where have you been. Lovely poem, perfect sentiments.
Muje aapse training leni padegi :D
Muje aapse training leni padegi :D
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re: Re: Unsated Love !!!
12th Apr 2014 7:21pm
Thanks for appreciating my work as always. And Ahaan aapko training ki zarurat nahi. You are already an expert :p
Re: Unsated Love !!!
13th Apr 2014 5:41am
...it's as if your ink has blossom into a new dimension, a deeper depth with strong emotional nuances. Love, love, love it...Xo
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13th Apr 2014 1:50pm
Omg! I am so happy to see your comment and an add to your reading list :) you are one of the finest poet here and I respect you so much!! I am just a learner. Glad you liked my work so much. Lots n lots of love! Xoxo
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Anonymous
1st May 2014 5:58am
Just loved the way you have captured the feeling that we say love is.. nice connections to otherwise mandane objects of daily life.
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