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Closer !!!
Can you come a lil closer ?
Closer, my love
Next to my heart
the safest place....
Your fingertips on my lips
slowly caressing the whole body
burning sensations
a blissful affair....
A pleasure deep inside
as your hands travel
the perfect curves
the perfect delight.....
Can you come a lil more closer ?
For holding me tight
Embracing my passion
& tantalizing your style....
Come closest my spark...
I ll strip my soul,
And
I ll strip my heart
for the dose of your
Everlasting love charm....
Closer, my love
Next to my heart
the safest place....
Your fingertips on my lips
slowly caressing the whole body
burning sensations
a blissful affair....
A pleasure deep inside
as your hands travel
the perfect curves
the perfect delight.....
Can you come a lil more closer ?
For holding me tight
Embracing my passion
& tantalizing your style....
Come closest my spark...
I ll strip my soul,
And
I ll strip my heart
for the dose of your
Everlasting love charm....
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Re: Closer !!!
10th Mar 2014 7:04pm
I've so enjoyed this. Really sensual and perfect words to share with someone special. Beautiful! :)
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11th Mar 2014 4:52am
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10th Mar 2014 10:40pm
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11th Mar 2014 4:52am
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11th Mar 2014 9:58am
steip my souls strip my heart!
Sensually beautiful pen Brins.
Another great one ;)
Sensually beautiful pen Brins.
Another great one ;)
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11th Mar 2014 11:34am
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11th Mar 2014 9:59am
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11th Mar 2014 11:35am
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11th Mar 2014 2:23pm
Interesting juxtaposition! You write "Next to my heart
the safest place....", but suggest it is you that could be in danger by "stripping your soul and heart".
the safest place....", but suggest it is you that could be in danger by "stripping your soul and heart".
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12th Mar 2014 7:09am
Re: Closer !!!
12th Mar 2014 3:07am
Hello my friend; This is a work of art written down in words my friend, like your words, always have...
"Embracing my passion
& tantalizing your style....
Come closest my spark...
I ll strip my soul,
And
I ll strip my heart
for the dose of your
Everlasting love charm.... "
Man, Lovin at its most Raw an passionate, I get that, an can dig that, its the way its meant to be, Lovin with ALL your heart an strength, its a Sagittarius thing, hehehe...
Also, I know that come closer song by cage the Elephant, other than "come a lil closer" this is Nothin like that, THIS is ALL ORIGINAL, an I know me songs, Great very well done song here darlin: Eddie
"Embracing my passion
& tantalizing your style....
Come closest my spark...
I ll strip my soul,
And
I ll strip my heart
for the dose of your
Everlasting love charm.... "
Man, Lovin at its most Raw an passionate, I get that, an can dig that, its the way its meant to be, Lovin with ALL your heart an strength, its a Sagittarius thing, hehehe...
Also, I know that come closer song by cage the Elephant, other than "come a lil closer" this is Nothin like that, THIS is ALL ORIGINAL, an I know me songs, Great very well done song here darlin: Eddie
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re: Re: Closer !!!
12th Mar 2014 7:11am
Thank you so much deadwolf :) This appreciation means a lot to me !! *Happy happy* xo
Re: Closer !!!
15th Mar 2014 10:03am
“Rough and wild hands found the bottom of the ocean
anyone can see your honesty from here.
the Hands just never got tired.
the sea of freckles resting at the crest of her cheeks
rose lips perma-pursed in half tilt
her resting heart-rate so high that i could almost see it
pirouetting within her chest
the dance of the waves in saline water ...
brought all its coloured lust
on the tip of the Pichkari ...
lets make everlasting HOLI...moist with Rangin passion...”
anyone can see your honesty from here.
the Hands just never got tired.
the sea of freckles resting at the crest of her cheeks
rose lips perma-pursed in half tilt
her resting heart-rate so high that i could almost see it
pirouetting within her chest
the dance of the waves in saline water ...
brought all its coloured lust
on the tip of the Pichkari ...
lets make everlasting HOLI...moist with Rangin passion...”
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26th Mar 2014 10:36am
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That is a powerful poem, Brinda! It's very brave to invite someone to come so close and you made that invitation to a sensual journey. Very touching!
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29th Mar 2014 5:57am
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Anonymous
1st May 2014 6:01am
never seen a sensual invitation, such pure way to express the inner feelings! how did I miss this poem for such long time :)
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7th May 2014 6:52am