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Remember me...
Remember Me...
Remember when I took you hand,
When you blushed,
After I told you,
Everything.
Remember when I blew you a kiss,
When you caught it,
I told you it was,
Love.
Remember when you smiled,
After I held you,
We took our breath,
Away.
Remember waking in my arms,
You had my heart,
And I was stealing,
Yours.
Remember walking in the moonlight,
Sharing my jacket,
Memories you can't,
Replace.
Remember the little things,
That made you mine,
All the love we,
Gave.
Remember our promise,
Our everlasting happiness,
Never let it,
Go
Remember what we were,
Our everlasting passion,
When no-one could take away our,
Dreams.
Remember the heartache,
Lost and searching
All I desired was,
You.
Remember the nights alone,
The vivid darkness,
You can't be replaced in my,
Heart.
Remember the yearning,
The pain inside,
But I never doubted,
Us.
Remember finding me again,
I never lost the love in my eyes,
I couldn't help but,
Smile.
You remembered me.
Remember when I took you hand,
When you blushed,
After I told you,
Everything.
Remember when I blew you a kiss,
When you caught it,
I told you it was,
Love.
Remember when you smiled,
After I held you,
We took our breath,
Away.
Remember waking in my arms,
You had my heart,
And I was stealing,
Yours.
Remember walking in the moonlight,
Sharing my jacket,
Memories you can't,
Replace.
Remember the little things,
That made you mine,
All the love we,
Gave.
Remember our promise,
Our everlasting happiness,
Never let it,
Go
Remember what we were,
Our everlasting passion,
When no-one could take away our,
Dreams.
Remember the heartache,
Lost and searching
All I desired was,
You.
Remember the nights alone,
The vivid darkness,
You can't be replaced in my,
Heart.
Remember the yearning,
The pain inside,
But I never doubted,
Us.
Remember finding me again,
I never lost the love in my eyes,
I couldn't help but,
Smile.
You remembered me.
Published 14th Mar 2011
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14th Mar 2011 11:13pm
I honestly enjoy this poem and find it is realistic and affects/ relates to me ... Amazing Job
15th Mar 2011 10:00am
Many thanks, I wrote this at a time of dreaming, it's as realistic as I can describe how I feel when im in love, and I hope many can relate, thanks for your feedback.
19th Mar 2011 6:09pm
21st Mar 2011 2:18am
22nd Mar 2011 5:32pm
just beautiful i can so relate to this with the love of my life how we seperated and then found each other again annd never lost the the that we had shared
22nd Mar 2011 8:30pm
Thank you, this is exactly what happened to me, I am glad you can relate and you found your love again also (:
22nd Mar 2011 8:57pm
22nd Mar 2011 10:33pm
26th Jul 2011 2:15am
i found this poem great because i could relate to it and the emphasis of the last word of each line was GENIUS I would have never thought of it lol but the emphasis adds even more emotion to it but keep up the good work!!
29th Jul 2011 12:27pm
many thanks one of my favourites and first poems its good to see it appreciated :)
