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the promise

He made a promise he made a commitment he put a ring on her finger then like that took it away he broke her with no care of wat he did they all said we where to young i knew it inside but i loved the idea of being bound to him he didnt want me he went bak to a girl he had left in the past only the story has a twist he went bak to her while still with me not i throw up and cry i am hurt i hope i get put in the hospital i hope for death suddenly my nightmares r things i want to happen to me

(true story guys)  
Written by arey_dark_angel
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