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LITTLE JACK HORNER
Please don't take my mischievous mind seriously, this isn't worthy of DU, but sometimes I just can't help myself.
Little Jack Horner
Sat in the corner,
Eating his sister's pie;
He put in his thumb,
And she had an orgasm,
And said “What a good lover am I!”
Little Jack Horner
Sat in the corner,
Eating his sister's pie;
He put in his thumb,
And she had an orgasm,
And said “What a good lover am I!”
Published 5th Apr 2014
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5th Apr 2014 4:25pm
I think the word orgasm in the poem is too literal for the metaphors throughout the poem. Possibly, she started to come or the cream started to come.
5th Apr 2014 4:47pm
