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Exhale
There comes a point...
a point where the inspiration
of life...
of the daily grinds...
of the silver linings...
As deep and even as shallow
as you go...
Never seems to be in sync.
Mental distillations become
Physical manifestations..
which
if allowed
become a personal crucifixion
of self doing....
The reversal of this..
is simple...
No more waiting...
Just exhale!
a point where the inspiration
of life...
of the daily grinds...
of the silver linings...
As deep and even as shallow
as you go...
Never seems to be in sync.
Mental distillations become
Physical manifestations..
which
if allowed
become a personal crucifixion
of self doing....
The reversal of this..
is simple...
No more waiting...
Just exhale!
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Re: Exhale
4th Apr 2014 9:02pm
....exhale, and inhale another breath of this fabulous ink.
Me like this, no, me LOVE this!
Wonderful piece, Shell! Xo
Me like this, no, me LOVE this!
Wonderful piece, Shell! Xo
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5th Apr 2014 1:51pm
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6th Apr 2014 3:44am
Yes I agree...'just exhale'....
This piece has many layers for me...
Thank you for it.
This piece has many layers for me...
Thank you for it.
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7th Apr 2014 1:03pm
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Re: Exhale
9th Apr 2014 6:32pm
This is off the chain ink Ms. Shell!!
Love the write and read!!
Sir Lancelott
Love the write and read!!
Sir Lancelott
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4th May 2014 10:58am
This emphasize my own mantra;"don't think too much,just breath and live!"
5stars for you my dear!!!
xoxo!!!
5stars for you my dear!!!
xoxo!!!
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re: Re: Exhale
5th May 2014 1:11pm
Thanks--I have to remind myself of this many times!! :) Thanks for the ink love!
Re: Exhale
7th May 2014 8:25pm
Just exhale.
Mission Accomplished..., although we do not want to become aware of that sometimes.
Mission Accomplished..., although we do not want to become aware of that sometimes.
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8th Jul 2014 2:27am
Stark ending, great write. I recently started doing deep breathing meditation, some hours several times. Keep up the great work!
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8th Jul 2014 2:39am
Thanks for the poetic kudos..much appreciated..have to remind myself of this often
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