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Fear - Senryu
I don’t fear the night
While the sun dawns every morn
No days without nights
I don’t fear the grave
As long as you laugh with me
Until I go west
But I’d fear the dark
No light during day and night
If you left for good
While the sun dawns every morn
No days without nights
I don’t fear the grave
As long as you laugh with me
Until I go west
But I’d fear the dark
No light during day and night
If you left for good
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Re: Fear - Senryu
4th Apr 2014 7:43pm
A well expressed love plea.
(BTW - know where the picture is set? Can't see the sign close enough to discern the language.)
(BTW - know where the picture is set? Can't see the sign close enough to discern the language.)
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4th Apr 2014 7:47pm
Lovely words you have for the poem. Thank you so much. I've been to Hanoi next to last year and took the picture there. It's Vietnamese :-).
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4th Apr 2014 8:39pm
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Dear lovely Gabriel! Thank you so much for your kind comment :-)! Glad you like the pic, too! xoxo
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4th Apr 2014 10:12pm
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Good to see you again, dear Sara! Thank you for your kind comment! Hope you're good!
Re: Fear - Senryu
4th Apr 2014 10:16pm
beautiful poem, Chi, love brings so much light into your life. & the photo has a look of caution in it; it's always wise to be cautious...
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re: Re: Fear - Senryu
4th Apr 2014 10:48pm
I appreciate your insightful comments much, John. Thank you yo much.
Yes, the photo shows that young woman, looking out for someone, watching the passers-by. You have to be cautios at night.
Yes, the photo shows that young woman, looking out for someone, watching the passers-by. You have to be cautios at night.
Re: Fear - Senryu
4th Apr 2014 10:46pm
It's never completely dark with
a friend...it's really, really good,
Chi..:)
a friend...it's really, really good,
Chi..:)
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re: Re: Fear - Senryu
4th Apr 2014 10:55pm
I'm humbled by your warm words, Paul. Thank you for your lovely comment. No, if you walk the dirt roads of life shoulder to shoulder with someone you will always be on the bright side of life.xoxo
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4th Apr 2014 11:14pm
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4th Apr 2014 11:31pm
That's it. If you were lucky to experience such a strong love it would kill you being without it. With the light gone and darkness rising you'll die from the paralyzing cold. Thanks, Hash, for your knowing thoughts. xoxo
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4th Apr 2014 11:51pm
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5th Apr 2014 11:16am
And as big as the universe is I'm much as glad you seem to feel my ink [tell me if this sentence is wrong, please]. Thanks a lot, Speak. xoxo
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2014 2:51pm
Such as it can be, Love also holds fear....
this reminds me a bit of an Irish folk song...
this reminds me a bit of an Irish folk song...
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6th Apr 2014 3:28pm
The fear to lose the love of your life can be immense and paralyzing. Those Irish folk songs a full of lost loves ... Thanks, Le Fay :-). Always glad to have you here.
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