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Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 10:07am
re: Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 10:19am
Yes I am OK, except a very hard disappointment! But anyways, I'll survive to this one. Just for public engagement! Thank you for asking and for your comment!
Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
Anonymous
- Edited 31st Mar 2014 2:05pm
31st Mar 2014 1:43pm
a collab: by Case & Vee for you Malin, to cheer you up :)
Malin do not sail
there will be other seasons
life is a voyage
breathe in the fresh ocean breeze
feel the warmth of the new dawn
taste the sweet red wine
cheer for a wonderful man
with a great big heart
5-7-5 by Vee
7-7 by Case
Malin do not sail
there will be other seasons
life is a voyage
breathe in the fresh ocean breeze
feel the warmth of the new dawn
taste the sweet red wine
cheer for a wonderful man
with a great big heart
5-7-5 by Vee
7-7 by Case
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re: Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 2:19pm
I am speechless! What a wonderful gift for me, really!
Thank you so much, friends of my heart, awesome poets, Vee and Case!
Thank you so much, friends of my heart, awesome poets, Vee and Case!
re: re: Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
Anonymous
31st Mar 2014 5:24pm
It was something we wanted to do for you Malin, you know how much we cherish you, you are a great man and we love you!!
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re: re: re: Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 10:10pm
Not so great, just 1m65!!! (lol)
Thank you so much, Case and Vee, you are very nice, just at this time, when I need to be helped!!!
Thank you so much, Case and Vee, you are very nice, just at this time, when I need to be helped!!!
Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 2:10pm
re: Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
31st Mar 2014 2:20pm
Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
4th Apr 2014 5:45am
re: Re: Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-03-31) : Huge pain in my heart
4th Apr 2014 10:16am