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Cerebral Thoughts
So, here I'll give my thoughts to the light
the vibrancy in harmonic colours of which
forgotten oratorios scripted out I once uttered,
but the words fell quiet in their complexities
my silence greeted the light in cerebral solitude;
But my thoughts,
oh! those thoughts!,
now there's a thing to be spoken about in cathedral rooms,
as vibrant and harmonious as the very light itself,
rejoicing in alleluias remembered,
for I fear neither the sound of my thoughts or the light before me.
Published 29th Mar 2014
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29th Mar 2014 8:49pm
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29th Mar 2014 9:09pm
30th Mar 2014 8:18am
Mmm "the vibrancy of harmonic colors", I dig that. There is something magical that happens when people are chanting and the vibrations are elevated, you shape that well with your words. great read :)
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31st Mar 2014 4:49pm
Can't imagine your thought falling silent, miss. Now trying to figure out when my thoughts first saw the light as well.
31st Mar 2014 6:48pm
Anonymous
31st Mar 2014 4:53pm
This is very beautiful in my opinion. Great job!
31st Mar 2014 6:49pm
6th Apr 2014 9:53am
such a serious & proud tone in your poem. it must be a fascinating place to be, that hall of sacred light...
6th Apr 2014 11:10am
6th Apr 2014 9:18pm
I feel like I can relate to this all the time. I am a very spiritual person, full of faith. But all the thoughts in my mind always get in the way! I loved the word "cathedral rooms" I don't know why. Very beautiful. The picture fits perfectly!
7th Apr 2014 5:56am
