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Lava Lamp
There is something so erotic
about this lava lamp of mine
makes me want to watch for hours
as these luscious purple shapes
float so sensuously through the
illumination of the changing light
bumping into each other
rubbing and caressing
then parting briefly
only to do it again
my lava lamp is so erotic
makes me think of you and I
cum on baby
lets play lava lamp together
about this lava lamp of mine
makes me want to watch for hours
as these luscious purple shapes
float so sensuously through the
illumination of the changing light
bumping into each other
rubbing and caressing
then parting briefly
only to do it again
my lava lamp is so erotic
makes me think of you and I
cum on baby
lets play lava lamp together
Published 28th Mar 2014
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28th Mar 2014 12:40pm
28th Mar 2014 10:57pm
Thank you for thinking my little poem well done and erotic!
My erotic poems vary in style and intensity, and this one clearly falls on the more subtle end of the spectrum.... :)
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My erotic poems vary in style and intensity, and this one clearly falls on the more subtle end of the spectrum.... :)
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28th Mar 2014 12:40pm
You have stirred the imagination of this "70's" child on a decidedly "Throwback Friday" Diggin' and remembering. Check out "Blacklight" http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/155887-black-light/
Glad I was able to stir your imagination with my poem especially if you were partially inspired to write your own poem because of it..... you always spill your hot ink so beautifully ;) , and I will comment on the poem you wrote.....
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28th Mar 2014 1:05pm
You are so clever with this one. Mmmmm! They come in purple.....you know I have to get one of those. LOL!! like this write. :)
28th Mar 2014 10:50pm
I got mine at a garage sale last week for a dollar and I have enjoyed it ever since.... watching it at night in my bedroom made me realize there is definitely somehing quite erotic about it --- even the shape is reminiscent of a phallus....
Hence my poem..... thank you as always sweet friend..... :)
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Hence my poem..... thank you as always sweet friend..... :)
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28th Mar 2014 7:18pm
28th Mar 2014 10:53pm
Thank you for your kind comment -- glad you liked this poem --watching my lava lamp is very "inspirational"...... ;) ♡♡♡
29th Mar 2014 5:44pm
Great piece Ms. Velvet!!!!
Happen to have a couple of my own!
Creative sweet ink!!!
Sir Lancelott
Happen to have a couple of my own!
Creative sweet ink!!!
Sir Lancelott
30th Mar 2014 10:16pm
Thank you for your sweet comment! Now you got me curious as to what your lava lamps look like -- would love to check them out sometime ;) ♡♡♡
1st Apr 2014 11:18pm
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4th Apr 2014 5:59am
Such a fun and creative way to look at a lava lamp! I really enjoyed reading..I liked the section talking about the curvy shapes bumping into each other, I could really picture it! Plus the ending was perfect..well done!
5th Apr 2014 4:56am
I am so happy you enjoyed the read and thought my poem was creative! I continue to enjoy watching my lava lamp every chance I get! ♡♡♡
10th Apr 2014 8:53am
anything which resembles
a phallus
a vagina and tulips
causes erection
of the meat
inside the burning froth
and as the entry begins
lavas spring
and orgasm does the excite
bring
a phallus
a vagina and tulips
causes erection
of the meat
inside the burning froth
and as the entry begins
lavas spring
and orgasm does the excite
bring
15th Aug 2014 1:13am
