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Invisible Death All In One
something reaks...
what the fuck is that...
its...itss....
frozen....
mounted to the earths surface solidified..
ice runnning through his veins...
skin dripping off his bones melting..
turning to ash...
what the fuck is going on man come on....
FUCKING SAY SOMETHIN BRO OR IM CALLING THE COPS!!!!
nota word broke the silence..
a choking sound abruptly began uncontrollably..
DUDE!! DUDEEE!!
ARE YOU OKAY!!!.....ARE YOU OKAY!!!!!
the terrifying gargling , muffling and choking
came to a dead silence...
a heavy solid weighted thud hit the concrete witha
tince smack!!!!
OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!
the friends freakin the fuck out pacing back and forth
frantically..
beep beep beep beep beep beep...
i can here him why the fuck cant i say anything...?????
shit shit shit shit!!!...
why the fuck cant i move...?
god damnet! why cant i moveee!!
my body wont even make the scimpiest fuckin quiver!!!!....
fuckin shit!!!....i really fucked myself up this time!!!....
wanting to cry so fuckin bad....
but i can't even control my tears ducts....
am i paralyzed or some shit!!!????
headlights come flyin down the dirt road wrecklessly as fuck
and come sliding sideways over the bushes to a stop spraying bits of gravel and dirt near my body lying there in dead weight....
my buddy comes flying towards me because it looked as if his feet never touched the ground....
pitch black..
and the headlights blinding me...
crying and yelling mumbled shit i couldnt comprehend..
still not an inch of my body is moveable..
he sees this jug of gas a few feet from where i was standing..
drops down to me and instantly smells putrid fumes coming from my body....
He knows my eyes are open....i think he does..at least..
he became silent with shock....
..........................
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!......
you....you...
you were huffing....THIS SHIT!!!!!
...................
an ambulance followed by 3 police cars come roarin into the
driveway!!...
HES RIGHT HERE RIGHT HERE!!
"what happened here"???
Im pretty sure he was huffing that gas right there!..
quickly but delicately they put me on a stretcher and strapped me down
shining a bright ass light in my eyes..
" hes still conscious"...
WHAT!!?? THEN WHY WONT HE SAY ANYTHING YOU FUCKIN LIARS!!!!!
my buddys just screaming and bein irate witha tear soaked face...
im trying sooo damn hard to tell him im ok..
I cant even blink or move my eyes let alone...
the sharp words in the guys voice drilled my ears
sending a sharp jolt through my body!...
"son im sorry but theres a good chance your friend is....... brain dead......
he just stood there............
everything in my body felt as if it started disappearing...
"HES STARTING TO CONVULSE"!!!!!
instantly everything went black and silent.. as the tunnel to hell....
i never woke up....
am i...
am i dead.....??????
what the fuck is happening.......
i cant see....
hear...
move...
nothin.. just hear my thoughts or some shit...
watever this is....
i was exactly wat he said i might b i began to think...
no ya see....i wassss braindead..
noww...
im completely dead....
i died from that seizure i had wen they were loading me
in the ambulance....
where the fuck is heaven or hell i ask myself??....
this is it????........
i never..
fuckin woke up......
what the fuck is that...
its...itss....
frozen....
mounted to the earths surface solidified..
ice runnning through his veins...
skin dripping off his bones melting..
turning to ash...
what the fuck is going on man come on....
FUCKING SAY SOMETHIN BRO OR IM CALLING THE COPS!!!!
nota word broke the silence..
a choking sound abruptly began uncontrollably..
DUDE!! DUDEEE!!
ARE YOU OKAY!!!.....ARE YOU OKAY!!!!!
the terrifying gargling , muffling and choking
came to a dead silence...
a heavy solid weighted thud hit the concrete witha
tince smack!!!!
OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!
the friends freakin the fuck out pacing back and forth
frantically..
beep beep beep beep beep beep...
i can here him why the fuck cant i say anything...?????
shit shit shit shit!!!...
why the fuck cant i move...?
god damnet! why cant i moveee!!
my body wont even make the scimpiest fuckin quiver!!!!....
fuckin shit!!!....i really fucked myself up this time!!!....
wanting to cry so fuckin bad....
but i can't even control my tears ducts....
am i paralyzed or some shit!!!????
headlights come flyin down the dirt road wrecklessly as fuck
and come sliding sideways over the bushes to a stop spraying bits of gravel and dirt near my body lying there in dead weight....
my buddy comes flying towards me because it looked as if his feet never touched the ground....
pitch black..
and the headlights blinding me...
crying and yelling mumbled shit i couldnt comprehend..
still not an inch of my body is moveable..
he sees this jug of gas a few feet from where i was standing..
drops down to me and instantly smells putrid fumes coming from my body....
He knows my eyes are open....i think he does..at least..
he became silent with shock....
..........................
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!......
you....you...
you were huffing....THIS SHIT!!!!!
...................
an ambulance followed by 3 police cars come roarin into the
driveway!!...
HES RIGHT HERE RIGHT HERE!!
"what happened here"???
Im pretty sure he was huffing that gas right there!..
quickly but delicately they put me on a stretcher and strapped me down
shining a bright ass light in my eyes..
" hes still conscious"...
WHAT!!?? THEN WHY WONT HE SAY ANYTHING YOU FUCKIN LIARS!!!!!
my buddys just screaming and bein irate witha tear soaked face...
im trying sooo damn hard to tell him im ok..
I cant even blink or move my eyes let alone...
the sharp words in the guys voice drilled my ears
sending a sharp jolt through my body!...
"son im sorry but theres a good chance your friend is....... brain dead......
he just stood there............
everything in my body felt as if it started disappearing...
"HES STARTING TO CONVULSE"!!!!!
instantly everything went black and silent.. as the tunnel to hell....
i never woke up....
am i...
am i dead.....??????
what the fuck is happening.......
i cant see....
hear...
move...
nothin.. just hear my thoughts or some shit...
watever this is....
i was exactly wat he said i might b i began to think...
no ya see....i wassss braindead..
noww...
im completely dead....
i died from that seizure i had wen they were loading me
in the ambulance....
where the fuck is heaven or hell i ask myself??....
this is it????........
i never..
fuckin woke up......
Published 26th Mar 2014
| Edited 29th Mar 2014
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