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guru
i read
stop
the dog stretches
rolls over
sleeps whistling
through his nose
i'm gonna close
my eyes and join him
stupid dog
- smarter than
edison's bulb -
knows what
night is for
stop
the dog stretches
rolls over
sleeps whistling
through his nose
i'm gonna close
my eyes and join him
stupid dog
- smarter than
edison's bulb -
knows what
night is for
Published 24th Mar 2014
| Edited 4th Jul 2016
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24th Mar 2014 6:57am
24th Mar 2014 9:22am
Aww..loved the summing up title...and the visuals in these liners
"the dog stretches
rolls over
sleeps whistling
through his nose"
..and your final hesitating yet total acceptance:)
nice relaxing piece!
"the dog stretches
rolls over
sleeps whistling
through his nose"
..and your final hesitating yet total acceptance:)
nice relaxing piece!
24th Mar 2014 10:32am
sweet.....
allways love a good dog'god treat /
the Rites of Wright-on be thusly written
24th Mar 2014 5:15pm
