Desire Incarnate

Another example of your
enjoyable erotica Brenda.

You should put all of your
scribes that are like this
together in a compendium
and sell it. I'd buy a copy
and have you sign it for me;
I'd come up with some crazy
way of having you sign it too. ;-)


   Pan

you put a delicious smile on my face imagining how you'd have me sign it thank you Pan ;) with love Brenda

amazing use of words to convey desire! evokes a mental image.. I am not soon to forget my friend!  in awe and with deep respect..xoxo domore

thank you for your gracious comment lovely lady put a smile on my face :) with love and respect Crim

Lovely Crim, this strikes at my core. A highly concentrated fire in my spirit. One so direct, my pulse increases as I type this comment, your pen having pierced my heart.

thank you VP though I hoped it pierced your heart in good way :) with love and respect Crim

 Yes, an indelible mark, it feels very good. :)

Your desires flame wildly. Passionate and sexy. Nicely inked. peace always* :)

thank you beautiful Angel I always cherish your visits :) with love and respect Crim

thank you Gabriel you always give the most beautiful comments :) with love and respect Brenda

To have a fire that flares at the simple thought of someone's touch, one would be so blessed. Intense heat that is witnessed from the far shore as it the blazing night being introduced with Crimson horizon.

your poetic touch in your comments always reach my heart Soul thank you :) with love and respect Crim

one night is never enough. when the addiction gets you, it never lets you go...

very romantic write, Crim...

you're right John I'm addicted sigh :) with love Crim

Amazing word flow. Great poem!

thank you lovely lady :) with love Crim

So cool,so smooth...love the end.

thank you Hash :) with love Crim

Brilliant write. So sensual, sad, luving all in one. Luv writes that lead us from one emotion to the next. Fantastic piece my sweet friend. :)

thank you lovely Flower :) with love Crim

This poem is truly wonderful! It flows together nicely and is so romantic! Glad I read it! :]

thank you kindly :) with love Crim

it's like chasing the wind sometimes... you feel it but never manage to get your hands on it.
a beautiful write of longing, Brenda xo

thank you beautiful Mia for understanding this write :) with love Brenda

Oh to be so desired, I think I'd just flat out faint! Excellently passionate my dear :)

thank you graciously Poe :) with love Crim