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Sister
For so many years
I had your back, never really noticing
...you secretly had mine
You would always follow me,
try on my clothes, take my things
without asking
Would want what I had
...Today I proudly love all you have
I would pretend you were my daughter,
taking you places, mom didn't have time to
guided you through school,
made time for girl talk,
dressed you and fixed your hair
so that you would look immaculate
wherever you went
...You are still this way today
Sacrifices I made for you and your daughter's safety
wasn't too much for me to do,
I felt like I had super hero strength when it came to you
...You thanked me later for it in your own way
Ultimately, you are one
who has been there for me
kept me aware and awake,
.."don't waste your precious time"
.."don't believe the hype, it doesn't make sense"
.."you will be back where you started"
.."don't stay stuck, it won't change"
Kept my secrets
and guarded them with your life
Told me,
"I will be here no matter what, we will do it together"
You are the sword every warrior needs.
I had your back, never really noticing
...you secretly had mine
You would always follow me,
try on my clothes, take my things
without asking
Would want what I had
...Today I proudly love all you have
I would pretend you were my daughter,
taking you places, mom didn't have time to
guided you through school,
made time for girl talk,
dressed you and fixed your hair
so that you would look immaculate
wherever you went
...You are still this way today
Sacrifices I made for you and your daughter's safety
wasn't too much for me to do,
I felt like I had super hero strength when it came to you
...You thanked me later for it in your own way
Ultimately, you are one
who has been there for me
kept me aware and awake,
.."don't waste your precious time"
.."don't believe the hype, it doesn't make sense"
.."you will be back where you started"
.."don't stay stuck, it won't change"
Kept my secrets
and guarded them with your life
Told me,
"I will be here no matter what, we will do it together"
You are the sword every warrior needs.
Written by
Lena-underneath
Published 17th Mar 2014
| Edited 18th Mar 2014
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Re: Sister
18th Mar 2014 5:43am
re: Re: Sister
18th Mar 2014 3:30pm
Your comment means a great deal to me.
Sometimes we disagree, but she will be there for me every time. Suddenly, being right or wrong no longer matters with us.
Thank you John!
Sometimes we disagree, but she will be there for me every time. Suddenly, being right or wrong no longer matters with us.
Thank you John!
Re: Sister
18th Mar 2014 5:47am
re: Re: Sister
18th Mar 2014 3:32pm
Thank you Rose!
She knew someone was playing a trick on me and called the bluff fast. She was right.
She knew someone was playing a trick on me and called the bluff fast. She was right.
Re: Sister
18th Mar 2014 5:38pm
...an genuinely tender dedication of love to your sister. This shows a glimpse of your heart for all to see, Lena! So caring and loving...Xo
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re: Re: Sister
Your words touch me deeply every time.
While some take advantage of my heart and crush it, sometimes it helps to have those who see your true heart remind you that you aren't a monster.
Gracias Ms. Rain!
While some take advantage of my heart and crush it, sometimes it helps to have those who see your true heart remind you that you aren't a monster.
Gracias Ms. Rain!
Re: Sister
18th Mar 2014 6:04pm
re: Re: Sister
18th Mar 2014 6:09pm
OMG, you just made me cry...lol
Yes, of course....this is such an honor.
Yes, of course....this is such an honor.
re: Re: Sister
19th Mar 2014 00:35am
Re: Sister
22nd Mar 2014 12:49pm
re: Re: Sister
23rd Mar 2014 2:54am
Thanks mami ...they will be there for you always..
Always appreciate you comments
Always appreciate you comments
Re: Sister
23rd Mar 2014 3:51pm
omg Lena, this made me cry. I've always wanted a sister and this is exactly how imagined it would be like if i had one. It's a bond unlike another, i know....but then...i'll never know.
You both are so lucky to have each other and this love, this devotion is gonna pay forward by your children and their children, we live by example.
You both are so lucky to have each other and this love, this devotion is gonna pay forward by your children and their children, we live by example.
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re: Re: Sister
23rd Mar 2014 10:26pm
Your comment is an incredible honor, Vee!
It's crazy because as much as she got on my nerves, I would want her to have everything even if I had nothing.
While I feel like your groupie, I feel like your soul sister....and I'm VERY good at having your back...LOL
Thank you so much for adding it to your list
It's crazy because as much as she got on my nerves, I would want her to have everything even if I had nothing.
While I feel like your groupie, I feel like your soul sister....and I'm VERY good at having your back...LOL
Thank you so much for adding it to your list
Re: Sister
24th Mar 2014 8:48pm
Lena, stellar piece. Sincere lines. Sincere signs. Sincere relationship.
Bravo!
The next to last line strikes an intimate cord. My Sis and I, although now two thousand miles apart, are extremely close. During 25+ years, whether in person or by phone, we never say goodbye until we say, 'I love you, no matter what!'
Bravo!
The next to last line strikes an intimate cord. My Sis and I, although now two thousand miles apart, are extremely close. During 25+ years, whether in person or by phone, we never say goodbye until we say, 'I love you, no matter what!'
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re: Re: Sister
25th Mar 2014 00:18am
What an amazing honor VegasPoet!
I'm so glad you can relate after you moved me with your Treasure Poem....
I have a brother too who was always my best friend growing up bc we are closer in age.. sister is 6 years younger.
I'm humbled you stopped by...
Thank you
I'm so glad you can relate after you moved me with your Treasure Poem....
I have a brother too who was always my best friend growing up bc we are closer in age.. sister is 6 years younger.
I'm humbled you stopped by...
Thank you
re: Re: Sister
27th Mar 2014 4:17pm
Your visit and comment has made me blush!
It was coming from my heart
An incredible honor Whale
Thank you
It was coming from my heart
An incredible honor Whale
Thank you
re: Re: Sister
23rd Apr 2014 1:52am