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Superfluous
D’you like what I do?
Don’t ask! For God’s sake, go on!
Make me fucking come!
Have a good night all together :-)! And do not take this one too seriously, please :-)!
Don’t ask! For God’s sake, go on!
Make me fucking come!
Have a good night all together :-)! And do not take this one too seriously, please :-)!
Published 15th Mar 2014
| Edited 16th Mar 2014
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16th Mar 2014 00:28am
16th Mar 2014 00:47am
16th Mar 2014 1:18am
Strong forceful words!
You can rest assured
most of us WILL say next to nothing
BUT u may hear sounds! hhhmmm ooohh
Oooohhhhhgggaaaahhhhh.... Lol
You can rest assured
most of us WILL say next to nothing
BUT u may hear sounds! hhhmmm ooohh
Oooohhhhhgggaaaahhhhh.... Lol
16th Mar 2014 11:18am
Okay, Poe, that really reassures me since my experience is restricted :-). Appreciate your sexy words, dear!
16th Mar 2014 1:49am
16th Mar 2014 11:16am
16th Mar 2014 9:48am
Could be summed up in other words as:
Words are superfluous, action is all.
Hear with your being, this is my call.
Words are superfluous, action is all.
Hear with your being, this is my call.
16th Mar 2014 11:15am
Aw, this is so YOU, Solomon! Like it a lot and more than my words :-). Impressive! Thank you so much for rephrasing my raw words!
16th Mar 2014 12:04pm
16th Mar 2014 12:49pm
Haha! Sit! Down! Come!
Thanks ... do not take those offensive ones too seriously :-).
Thanks ... do not take those offensive ones too seriously :-).
16th Mar 2014 1:37pm
16th Mar 2014 6:50pm
21st Mar 2014 10:54pm
don't try to soften it, Chi, shout it out! take pleasure, when pleasure is given!
I admire your celebratory tone...
I admire your celebratory tone...
21st Mar 2014 11:08pm
Haha :-). I will follow your advice, John! Sometimes it's superfluous to hold back! Celebratory tone??? Oh ... what's celebratory about the tone???
22nd Mar 2014 7:34am
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27th Mar 2014 7:20am
Thanks a lot Lance! It's a bit raw but cut to the chase, as I wanted it to be :-).
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28th Mar 2014 8:34pm
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28th Mar 2014 9:44pm
Devour them, then :-). Hey, thanks Gabriel, for your sweet words and the attention :-)!
