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Suicide
Silent tongues scream out,
Proudly begging to be heard,
Distorted grins hide ignorance,
Sanity wavers from a beautiful word.
Heavy thoughts burn minds,
Shadows hide the sunny day,
Sweet pain releases frustrations,
Endless suffering fades away.
Proudly begging to be heard,
Distorted grins hide ignorance,
Sanity wavers from a beautiful word.
Heavy thoughts burn minds,
Shadows hide the sunny day,
Sweet pain releases frustrations,
Endless suffering fades away.
Published 6th Mar 2011
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6th Mar 2011 6:12pm
the words have fleeting beauty, the piece is so short it gives me the feeling that I arrived to late and leaves with an unsettling finality. Well done
7th Mar 2011 9:21am
22nd Feb 2012 6:15pm
I love the way you set up stanzas hun
It paints a visual picture that puts me (the reader) inside your thoughts
It paints a visual picture that puts me (the reader) inside your thoughts
23rd Feb 2012 6:53pm
