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'Lynsey'
the truest art is the naked enchantment of a woman.
just gaze at her, & dare to deny it.
regaled in the wind that holds her, & refuses to blow
in any direction. sunbeams, iridescent gems, that
alight in her hair, invoking radiant flares –
the rippling fall of her tresses.
the way she poses, pensive & subservient: does it
make her more beautiful? more desirable?
she drives a man’s yearning blood, hot as desert rocks;
commands the drumbeat of his primal, savage heart.
nor would her charm be denied to another woman,
a woman with the heart of a tigress.
she welcomes every bold paramour.
she is exotic, erotic
she is all at once coquette & pristine.
her admirers (males & so-inclined females)
allow their minds to wander with hands that
have never touched her, lips that were made
to kiss the troves & alcoves of her flesh; to seek
her hidden beatitudes: areolae, arrogant nipples,
the blossoming gates of passion’s austere glory…
her brazen posture speaks a sexual language. I understand.
(Art: Lynsey by A. D. Cook)
Published 15th Mar 2014
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15th Mar 2014 9:15am
John this speaks to me on a primal level.. so sensual and erotic causing me to want to taste this woman ;) with love and respect Crim
15th Mar 2014 9:34am
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15th Mar 2014 4:26pm
Pristine, indeed. Wow, this is stimulating. Your verse is extravagant, reaching right in a manipulating my senses. Thank you, for this!!
15th Mar 2014 4:40pm
This piece is phenomenal. Bravo! BRAVO!
The first three lines are undeniable fact.
The first three lines are undeniable fact.
15th Mar 2014 7:07pm
Interesting your vision is... You have captured the beauty of such vulnerability.. Beautiful art she is!
15th Mar 2014 8:15pm
Such a sensual and arousing piece, John. You depicted that woman expertly and so full of respect and desire! Brilliantly done!
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19th Mar 2014 5:35pm
Something satisfying in having inspiration flood in through a powerful image...
Well translated, from eyes to page, hardwired into the reader's head.
Well translated, from eyes to page, hardwired into the reader's head.
29th Jun 2014 3:07am
I love how sometimes you read something that almost feels like the same thoughts that were possibly stolen from your mind..this speaks to me in so many more ways than I could begin to explain..thank you..cutsy bow
21st Jul 2016 5:26am
